Daxia Town Yesi

The plot is quite speechless. I have written hundreds of chapters and it revolves around this villain organization. The problem is that this organization feels like an early stage boos. How should I put it? It feels like I can't get out of a village. I am not a world-wide villain. I can't put it into words. I am speechless and keep wandering in one place.

If nothing else, let's just talk about telekinesis. I have just become a first-timer. It's understandable to control some small things. Even controlling half a knife is okay, but controlling the bullets is terrifying. What is the initial speed of the bullet, how much power it brings, and how much time it takes. If the bullets fired can be controlled, why do you need a gun? Then the grenade thrown by others is still triggering? The control stopped in mid-air and no one took it down? So many masters let a little guy run away. The high realms of others are just for viewing, while the protagonist's low realms are just for showing off.

It's too ink-stained. Alas, I thought I found a book I could read.

It's so boring. It's been 500 chapters and it's still in the same place. Isn't it going to end at this point🤔

It's not good-looking. I saw that I went to save the child before, but I knew the clues and didn't call anyone. I pretended to be a b-person. They were all deliberately designed to lower my intelligence. If you like short stories, you can read it. I can't stand it anymore.

There is no preparation for writing whatever I want, and no skills or elements for writing a novel.

It's too ink-stained, it's all watercraft, it's a grinding fight, can't you defeat the enemy with one move? You want me to give you 10 seconds, I'll give you 3 moves and so on, nonsense literature, the three wolves and the Brotherhood are no one else, it's just a bunch of nonsense and I'm speechless.

The protagonist of more than a thousand chapters is only a second-level character, and the content of the previous five or six hundred chapters can't be found even by a non-human being! Zhen Yesi's national special organization😅😅 looks like a joke no matter how you look at it! The introduction is more interesting! Not to mention it has nothing to do with the content, it's complete nonsense

Anyway, I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 270. What about you?

What the hell, the kid was kidnapped by a mouse. I doubt the protagonist.