The Most Powerful System for Traveling Through All Realms

To be honest, this book often feels like an explanation. It feels very complicated, has no passion, and has no desire to read on. After looking at the votes, I got 99+ at the beginning of writing, but only 11 votes later, which shows a lot of problems. A book must be well-written to make people look concise, passionate, interesting, and have the desire to read. Only by rating, voting, and rewarding can you get promoted. You can refer to Wu Dong Qian Kun, where the fighting looks very simple. Everyone has nine years of compulsory education, so you can understand. It was okay at first, but once I wrote the explanation, it felt very complicated. The reader has no desire to continue reading. The only feature of this book is that the subject matter is very good. I will vote for it on this point. I hope the author sees it. Thanks !

Chapter 534: When did Chaos Bell become the leader of Tongtian Cult? The Chaos Bell is the companion treasure of Donghuang Taiyi after Pangu opened the sky, and the leader of Tongtian is the Four Swords of Zhuxian. Brother, why don't you check the information when you write an article? Write whatever you want? ? ? ?

It was okay at the beginning but then it stretched my hips. Also, the transition from martial arts to cultivating immortals was too casual. Is there any plot about killing immortals?

The writing turned into a mindless article. It was a woman who saw her and couldn't walk. After meeting the woman once or twice, she gave up her family beliefs and so on. To be honest, it was a bit mindless.

Although this is my first time reading it, this book is really well written, so thumbs up!

Nascent Soul = Human Immortal? Transformation of gods is equal to Daluo Jinxian? It's really random writing, nondescript

The steps were too big, it felt like I was pulling my balls...

Typos, confusing plot. Unreasonable arrangement and logic, random data, inconsistent. A time-travel novel, there are hundreds of chapters in "Martial Arts, Swordsman, Chinese Drama, Conquest of the Gods", and the next two thousand chapters are written by you☞Where's MM?

The first few hundred chapters can be said to be getting more and more outrageous as they go to the end. I don't know where they fell into.

The more I wrote, the more chaotic it became. After a few hundred chapters, the plot started to get confusing. Each world was written more chaotically than the next. At the end, it started to be completely chaotic and the logic was lost.