Liang Jian: I Have a Canteen

The subject matter, characters, and story are all very good, but the plot is really tiring to read. Why add a bunch of useless plots to a main storyline? After reading all the plots, they don't match up. Why are you writing about him?

It's just average. It's different from other novels. This small shop doesn't play any role. It feels a bit like trying to sell someone else's meat. The protagonist is not in the shop and just wanders around.

What kind of crappy book😒, only eight points? Find someone to brush it😒, five points is too much😒

The plot is okay, but it has nothing to do with the canteen. It is more like a warehouse for supplies, and there are very few supplies. There is not much interaction with the plot of Liangjian. It would not make any difference if the Liangjian characters in it had different names.

When can we build a warship and save a battleship? I think the Musashi ship is very good, as it avoids the fate of being sunk in the port.

I think it's pretty good-looking, better than others

Very good, not the kind of chronicle article. It can be seen that the author wrote carefully.

It has nothing to do with the name, and the writing is very strange. The writing style is too. . . .

The writing is so bad, even if I follow the script of Liangjian, it will be like this, ugh

The male protagonist is plain and timid. Erotic.