My Scenic Area Is a Huge Hit

I gave up after reading it for more than 30 points. You have to have the right amount of text. Basically every chapter has a few prompts to get 100. I mainly listen to books at work, and the listening experience is always very poor. If I read it, I guess not many people are willing to watch this thing all the time. I won't talk about the plot. I haven't seen enough to say that I am not qualified to say it. I will give you an average, bye.

The subject matter is fine, but the system you wrote seems to be non-existent. After reading dozens of chapters, there is still a temple where old people go to collect eggs every day. Talking about a special effect of pregnancy, I casually wrote about a couple, but then it disappeared. What happened to this couple later? Didn't write it either. Maybe I didn't see it, but how long has it been since? This article is purely intellectual, and it only takes a few hundred dollars per person from the system. There are still dozens of pictures that I don't understand what you wrote?

There is something interesting in the front, the plot is normal, but why did it start to go off topic after attending the martial arts conference in the capital? There are too many things mixed together, and the scenic spots are well written, but why do ancient martial arts begin to appear? Before the world of ancient martial arts is clearly written, there are only two sects. Complete Another superpower is pulled out, the apocalypse is coming, the ancient martial arts can use it to fight monsters, and it is a fantasy that travels to other planets, it is a mess, the style is messed up, the background is not explained clearly, the plot is written in vain, I am so angry, the previous one is getting more and more biased, the number of words is water

The previous part was pretty good, but starting from the time when my brother had a car accident, it was like the author had been changed. Everything was completely different. Even the heroine was changed. I have known and worked with you for several years, but it is not as good as the one I have known for a few months. I am speechless.

The subject matter is very novel, and it looked pretty good in the past. I don't know why, but it changed when I went to Beijing. The theme is a scenic spot, but the protagonist has spent hundreds of chapters on it. Forget it. Suddenly, my friend Wu Mingshi (the fat man) was written to death, and then many emotional lines emerged. If you are a stallion, why do you always emphasize that you hate getting married, and say that you can achieve immortality without feelings, so the fat man It was written to death, and the fat man's wife fell in love with the protagonist again. The fat man died in his early seventies. In less than half a month, the good scenic spot story turned into a proper urban stud story (not a stallion hate story). After Luo Ying was summoned, the plot of the scenic spot changed. You can not be responsible and let the tool people do it, but at least I will tell you how the scenic spot became popular step by step and became better. It's a quick summary, and the whole emotional line surrounding the protagonist is written in one sentence. It's hard to describe in one sentence!

I saw Chapter 1023. It was pretty easy to run a scenic spot at first, and then started to work on fantasy. In the end, I went to another planet and took in a female apprentice. I still slept with the people summoned by the system. I want to ask the author, is the protagonist so horny? It's just that I have to sleep with a girl every day and my relationship line is a mess. The brother dies, and then the brother's wife falls in love with the protagonist again.

There are several scenic spots, but none of them are serious about making money. The Queen of Gifts has given away so many gifts without any feedback, which is a waste of subject matter.

All kinds of water, all kinds of running accounts

In the early stage, I thought it was okay. When the system prompts me for word count, I feel like I can just skip it. But the number of words about the death of the stepfather who is sick and the brother who was in a car accident is unjustifiable. It doesn't advance the plot yet, I'm really convinced

Zhenshiro ruined this theme. First of all, he gave away money to set up the scene. As a result, the protagonist did not want to develop the scenic spot at all, so he simply used part of the money to hire people to check in. It was really speechless. Then there's the plot, which is full of words and doesn't mention scenic spots. It's all trivial. It's a hundred chapters, just one scenic spot, with 100,000 people checking in, all relying on the old lady to come every day, so why can't we advertise? Can't you go publicize it? All the money I gave you as a check-in was used to buy eggs. The commercial street has been sold. Do you want to build a hotel and a snack street? Isn't this a virtuous circle? It's disgusting to have to stare at those old ladies