The Film and Television City Starts from the Courtyard House

Let's talk briefly! I've read about 30 chapters in total, and it's really not that good. It's probably about the original plot, and there haven't been any major changes. It's written without any brains. As a time-traveler, I feel aggrieved everywhere and it's so bland that I can't explain it. If I want to read the original work, why should I read yours?

I can only say that in general, most of the world follows the plot, which is the same as having a protagonist and not having a protagonist, except for the inclusion of women. Besides, after so many worlds, why doesn't the protagonist make any progress at all? Has life experience not increased at all after going through so much? There's no main plot, it's basically just recruiting the girl to follow the plot.

The character is broken, what did you write?

What the hell are you writing? This guy doesn't look like a time traveler at all. He looks like a fool.

What about being willing to give up? ? ? And why is it so watery?

The protagonist is worthy of being a silly pillar. I really feel a little silly in the beginning.

Copy and paste the original work, the plot is not changed, just insert a few sentences in the middle and it becomes a book

It completely copies the original plot, there is nothing new at all, and the work level is poor. It goes like this and then that, and everyone is very fickle. A person can become better, worse, and better again without any experience. It is completely impossible to watch. Just jump and watch to pass the time.

The further we get to the back, the more useless the protagonist becomes, which makes me feel aggrieved and panicked.

It's not good at all. There's no passion in the novel. It just follows the plot.