Damimi: I Asked You to Find Your Father, You Find a Dragon King

Selling dog meat on sheep's heads. Messy and inconsistent. I have no problem with you writing about the harem, but writing about people is too disgusting. The point is that every time a woman appears, the other women seem to disappear? For studio products, if one person can no longer write it, find another person to write it.

What did you write? What is the character of the male protagonist? Is it strange that a person who can sleep until almost noon on a variety show can raise such a good daughter? You also said that you have restrained yourself because of the live show? This sucks!

It's so rubbish, no one can do it as a time traveler.

The three views are exploded. Of course, for me, the three views are very open now. Even though I am a 20-year-old man, my three views are still conservative.

The title has nothing to do with the text, and the plot is unsightly and abstract. There are also frequent omissions of words, for example: Yueyue said: Daddy, I like you. The word "no" was dropped. Later, the message was sent successfully, but the word "WE" was missing. It was only after reading the last few sentences that I realized that the previous word was missing. You have to guess the meaning when reading a book. Difficult.

Selling dog meat on sheep's heads. Messy and inconsistent. I have no problem with you writing about the harem, but writing about people is too disgusting. The point is that every time a woman appears, the other women seem to disappear? For studio products, if one person can no longer write it, find another person to write it.

The protagonist is a failure, as if he has a split personality. On the one hand, he creates a good father character, but on the other hand, he is unwilling to give his daughter a mother. Although there have been side descriptions, it is said that the protagonist is immature, but he is still a little boy at heart. But how could a little boy raise the daughter described by the protagonist? It is only possible to be a responsible dad and then mature and become a better father in the process of taking care of his daughter. And the most frightening thing is that when writing about cute children, you can't have a scumbag father. This is a core conflict. Even if there are a bunch of female stars around, it is destined to be weak, otherwise the character of the cute baby will collapse along with the protagonist. Obviously, this book is a typical example of a book that collapses all at once, and in the middle period it will make people feel detached no matter how they read it.

The two parts are out of touch, and the plot becomes chaotic starting from the 300th chapter. It feels like it was written just to mix up the number of words, completely deviating from the main line, and writing a little bit of what I wanted to write, and it is inconsistent. Too much poison.

It's all wrong and I can't understand it until the end. A messy bunch

It is more historical than Coke. In the words of the king, it means giving away 100,000 ancient personal heads, 0 output, 0 injuries, 0 group participation and 1 economy.