Start: Lord of God Burial Peak, I Have Trained Countless Great Emperors!

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Every realm is written in a mess, it looks like a ghost, it makes people confused.

It looks good so far, but I don't know what will happen in the future.

I like your plot very much. It's very bold and the progress is very fast. However, there are some typos. But it doesn't affect my support for you

You must know that the cultivation system of this world is as follows: Qi refining, foundation building, golden elixir, Yuanying, transformation of gods, cave void realm, Mahayana, breaking sky, Tao king, real person, venerable, saint, saint, and great emperor.

When I see the updated version, I feel that there is nothing outstanding, I just feel that something is missing. It is very boring and a bit boring. Maybe it's because I can't watch this type of genre🤔

There is a lot of nonsense about transforming gods into fighting golden elixirs. When the apprentice is injured, his clothes are broken and explode. I have to say that the writing is terrible. I suggest you read the similar book next door. Return the apprentice ten thousand times to build the foundation and I will become an immortal. I am not complaining about you. The writing is really bad.

The names of the characters are often spelled wrong, and the realms are even more confusing. I didn't even think about reading it, but it still made me feel uncomfortable. I didn't expect that it was the first time I wrote a negative review for this book.