Technological Refiner

A so-called picture of a woman eating grapes can be used five or six times. If you don't know how to write about women, you have to write it hard. The psychological repetitive writing of the supporting characters accounts for half of the number. For details, you can refer to the One Piece anime and then double it. The score is 4 points.

It's okay at the beginning, but it doesn't look good after the halfway point. The plot is mediocre and the logic is confusing.

Awesome, stupid

I don't know what I'm writing about, but I have to join this sect to find abuse. Why do you think it's for the sake of the practice? Maybe you have practiced? You have never practiced the heaven-defying skills that you already possess, and you have been playing around with useless technological creations. You clearly know that you have a problem, and this problem is related to the spirit, but have you practiced it? I kept talking here and there, and the water kept flowing.

The storyline is good, it combines technology with fantasy, the fighting part is well written, nothing is the same, and you won't get bored after reading it.

It feels pretty good. The combination of technology and fantasy is different from the previous ones that turned into complete fantasy as they were written. The role of special substances is very well presented. The ending is okay.