Time Travel: the Eldest Sister Is Difficult

The story structure is okay, but the details are too fake, radish is more expensive than meat, and a tanning technique sells for two hundred taels...

The subject matter of the story is good, but the writing is too tedious. Some of the parts that could be mentioned in one stroke are too detailed. For example, the properties of medicines. You said that a farmer is better than a miracle doctor. Then there are the thank yous at the end of the chapters. Thanking this and thanking that is too long-winded. It is annoying to say thank you occasionally. There are so many chapters.

There is no need to have so many thank yous at the end of each chapter. The hot pot city will receive a 30% profit dividend of 1,000 yuan within 20 days of its opening, and the pharmacy will receive a 10,000 yuan monthly dividend of 10% profit.

I don't know what the author wants to express. One moment he said that the heroine has no parents in modern times, and the other moment he said that she has a younger brother who accompanies her parents in modern times. In short, it's just a mess. I can't understand a lot of it🙄

Very average