This Star Is a Bit Salty

The male protagonist is not idle at all! Instead, I became extremely busy! The male protagonist responds to all requests and invites constantly! The teacher in the town takes the students to see the hero every three days, and the hero personally takes them to play! Where are the free fish? You're so busy that you don't even have time to grow vegetables, right?

Delicious 😋

I'm a good writer of water characters, but I don't have any theme! The early stage was a complete hodgepodge. If nothing else, why doesn't the protagonist change his car after making so much money through copyright? Do you always ride a motorcycle when going to town or county seat? And does it never rain in this town?

I have read almost a hundred or two hundred chapters. How should I put it? I am starting to get tired and have no interest in reading anymore. It feels like the main character always goes to the village entrance to lead the way when he comes. The writing is very different, and it is not like the title of the book. The most idle fish is not only not idle fish, but also busy taking off. There are various invitations. The most important thing is that you are always in the same place. Don't you feel bored? There are very few things in the entertainment industry. Instead, there are various poems, paintings, children's novels, etc.

It's mechanically applied, and the plot is extremely unnatural.

One person is writing songs and screenwriting. Children's stories, drawings, farming, comics, animations are all pretentious, um, I've never heard of them, ah, number one? Back and forth! There are too many descriptions of everyone's heart, and the thoughts of both good and bad characters have to be written... Alas, the protagonist of this system is still a salty fish? The system gives all elixirs... An animal that after eating it, it immediately came back to life and recognized its master 😂 The sea... It's all water... This score... Also contains water

It's said to be a salty fish, but I didn't watch it from the beginning to the end. I took a day off and either took people to play or showed them the way, and then took two women to play around. The content was extremely boring😔. As a systematic person, and a person with all the knowledge on the earth, it is very difficult to understand that every time I invest in a movie, I have to bring two women with me -_-||. What if you fall in love with him, or like both of them? I think it's still understandable. I don't fall in love from beginning to end and just take them out for fun. Does it make sense?

The antonym of "Xianyu" in this novel is that you can't take any time off at all.

The front part is okay, but the back part is too wordy and seems to have mixed up the number of words. The plot flies too far and I really can't watch it anymore.

The writing is messy, writing everything, doing everything here and there?