The Most Powerful Journey Across All Realms

The protagonist is indecisive and does nothing, and his relationship management is also a mess. He flirts with Zhou Zhiruo when he is underage. He knows that Zhou Zhiruo's father will die but does not take the father and daughter away. He does not want to work hard to earn ratings, so he just messes around. The system only does not allow killing Tianming, and it does not say that it is not allowed to change the plot. Why does Yitian World know that Yuan Ren has lost his conscience and is inhumane and does not kill a few royals to warn Yuan Ren. He directly kills Emperor Yuan and the prince, and then kills most of the generals. Then the score will be completely maxed out. It's true that there's a reason why your book's rating is low. It's true that the writing is poor.

In order to continue the next volume of the plot, the innate realm is too awesome and there is no proper setting of the innate realm. Just kill thousands of people in front of the battle. The description of the characters in Yitian plot is too little and the scene changes too quickly. A good article should also pay attention to the causes and consequences. In the end, the author thought that the writing was good and he wanted to have a climax to make it more satisfying.

Unable to enter the pit

This book is suitable for people who have never read the original work. It is normal for time travel novels to not respect the original work. It would be weird to directly change the characters of the original work.

Just like skewers, they get burnt when skewered.

Every time you go to a world, you have to seal your cultivation and start from scratch.

It can no longer be described as mentally retarded.

It would be better to watch Xuehen's system of immortal heaven that travels through all realms and Wenjian Zhongnan's god-level system to educate the heavens.

The male protagonist is a hypocrite who deliberately discredits other male protagonists and flaunts himself.

The plot is mediocre, with a lot of typos, and it's a pure thoroughbred story written in a mess.