Immediately After the Immortal Emperor Returned, He Was Discovered by the Whole World

The invincible novel mainly writes about the protagonist being invincible. The early stage is okay, but in the middle stage, the protagonist is directly written to death. He may only appear once in dozens of chapters. There is no protagonist at all, and it is all supporting roles. It is not confusing to skip to three or four chapters. There is no main plot at all, and I have no idea what I am writing.

The incident has nothing to do with the protagonist. If the protagonist is suddenly written off, the book can still be written. It will end when the protagonist's parents die.

Who is the protagonist? The protagonist seems to have nothing to do in the middle period.

Just practice more. If you don't understand how to write, don't write. It's not your fault that you can't write, but it's your fault if you come out to harm others.

There is no distinction between priorities, the plot is bland, and every little thing requires several chapters.

The author can't seem to tell who the protagonist is, and the writing is so confusing that he spends most of the time writing about the supporting characters. A bit overwhelming.

I originally came here for a fun article, but after reading a few chapters, it was just nonsensical and the main character became a supporting character!

I don't mind watching it, it's okay in the early stages, but then a world invasion starts, and it's a grind.

It looks good, but this ORG is very annoying.

This start is in vain. The author has too little in his stomach and his level is too low.