The Straight-Shooting Man in Showbiz

Don't criticize, just comment objectively and point out 2 shortcomings. 1. Emotional line issues. The male protagonist is slow to warm up emotionally, and can even be said to be indecisive, which is inconsistent with the influence of Li Li. If he explained it as a slow-motion relationship, it would conflict with his behavior. There are too many female characters, but the proportion of the plot is not controlled at all. As a result, there is space for each character, but there is not enough to stand out. It is better to only write two. 2. Too many repetitive descriptions. Although the content is clearly explained through character dialogue, a few paragraphs are still written in line drawings. If the content is connected and progressive, it means the writing is great. But simple repetition is unnecessary and affects the perception.

It's really average. Some of the songs are really unpopular. Songs that even I, a person born in the 1980s, have never heard of can appear on it. So slippery.

I can't stand it. To put it bluntly, if there is no Jiang Da, Lin Li is nothing. Why can't he go to heaven if he is so stupid? And there are two mothers who don't know anything as agents, haha

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