It All Starts with Kneading Dough

If you can't write the business war scene well, don't write it. After reading more than 800 chapters, it becomes more and more unsightly. The biggest taboo in online novels is that the author digs a hole that cannot be filled, makes an enemy to deal with, and then tolerates all kinds of losses. If it continues for about ten chapters, the reader can get through half of it. Everyone knows that Romance of the Three Kingdoms is good to watch. Just look at it from Zhou Yu's perspective and see if anyone will watch it. I'll give you a few more chapters, and I'll abandon the book if I can't change it anymore.

I just read Chapter 40, it's okay. The biggest problem is a common problem in food novels. In order to suppress first and then expand or something else, the protagonist must be set in a way that doesn't work in the early stage. Isn't this nonsense? The setting of this book is so disgusting. My grandfather is a chef who is a god of food. Since he was a child, he has been unable to make noodles well and cannot cook any stir-fries at all. Do you believe it? When you write a story, don't fool the readers into thinking they are fools. The setting is obviously illogical and it is too congenital to give it good reviews. It's not easy to code, so I won't give a bad review.

After listening to Chapter 11, I didn't feel immersed😓

I like the plot and I like food very much

The emotional drama is well written, but there are still many things going on

Ask, who is the heroine?

Category writing single heroine, where is the heroine?

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