Unparalleled Scholar

The writing is okay, and the last novel I just finished was Xiaoyao Little Scholar. The first 40% or so of these two books are very similar, and they may have come from the same studio. The harem wives in this novel are not bad, and they can play mahjong without losing one. Each of them has been together for a long time.

The plot is too fast, my wife has just died, and there are a lot of women. Can't Paper Maker develop a wretched relationship with the little beggar? Can't the two women in the village come out after fifty or sixty chapters? I don't even know the word water. The death of my wife, the city lord's niece, the two sisters from the village, and the little beggar all came together in less than twenty chapters. Have you entered an alley?

What are you writing about? The heroine is useless except that she got married in the first few dozen chapters and couldn't consummate the marriage. After reading more than a hundred chapters, the marriage was not consummated. She still had to practice martial arts, and the protagonist has no qualifications. The heroine didn't say anything before getting married. What's even more embarrassing is the life experience of the hero. The plot was not attractive at first. No matter how deceptive it was, the man in the Lu family didn't think about the hero until after he died. In the end, the hero went back without saying a word. The hero's biological mother was killed over there! You said you copied Xiaoyao Little Scholar, so you copied it and made these bloody plots! Let's avoid pitfalls for everyone.

After seeing some of the bloody dramas about the Lu family, I can't stand it anymore. Isn't it good to consider yourself an ancestor? I have to go to the Lu family.

The plot is cliche and nothing new! The main author's writing style is really not good, the time and place cannot be explained clearly, the character description is vague, and many plots are not well prepared and quite abrupt. They all rely on the readers' imagination. At this level, the author is recommended not to write online articles.

There is no connotation in what is written

Young people who are capable don't want to be in official positions and live like old people like Twilight, without any passion at all. I have a huge wealth, countless secret skills, but no ability to protect myself at all? The author asks for support when he says something bad at the end of the chapter. You have to write at that level to get support. The protagonist is surrounded by a lot of beauties, and he himself is talented, wealthy, and beautiful. After reading more than a hundred chapters, he is still a child. I don't know whether the protagonist can hold it in, but everyone who looks at it is filled with anger. I'm sorry, author, because your idea doesn't quite meet the needs of normal people, so I can't give you praise.

There are too many parts of the plot that are illogical. It seems like it doesn't take any time to rush, and you can endure it in the front, but you can't stand the battle in the back, and the whole thing becomes chaotic.

You were assassinated and you still don't want to be an official? Don't you know that a common man is not guilty, but he is guilty of carrying a jade? ?

Pretentious things will be rated -5 points