Please Call Me the Owner

Originally this book was good to me, but from the moment Xiaoya was injured and the protagonist wanted to "steal" the heart of the stars, I felt something was wrong. The protagonist is a decent character no matter how you say it, the hero of the Star Tower Hall. You actually talk about stealing in such a nice way? Forget it about stealing the hearts of the protoss, you also gave me the explanation "corruption from the upper levels" and I accept it. But isn't it a bit wrong for you to secretly seal the forbidden area, and then accuse Shakira from the moral high ground, 66? Even if it is written like this, it would make sense if you had no choice but to borrow it and then return it. Don't say that you can't take it out after absorbing it. There are so many chapters and I don't want to think about how to replace low-level strange stones.

It's okay. It's pretty good at the beginning, but it's a bit off at the end. The ending feels a bit unfinished and too rushed, but you can still give it a look. After all, the subject matter is pretty good, fantasy + harem novel.

The author's material is good, but the character design is very confusing. At the beginning, he was not a bad person, rational, decisive, not greedy for money and lust, and worked hard to make progress. Moreover, he also knew that the villain died because he talked too much, was good at last-hitting, and was not blind. After joining Xiaoya in the middle period, his character became impulsive, irrational, and brainless. He was flirting with others while sticking to it. Bottom line, it feels a bit like setting up a monument, especially the Summer City incident, which is very abrupt. It seems that the protagonist is invincible all of a sudden and is very good at showing off. Later, a woman is forcibly matched with the male protagonist. Is there no man left? And after falling into another world, talking about the relationship in the previous life, it is quite unforgettable, but it is too fast to let go, and you have to sacrifice yourself because of a ring? He also made excuses for Xiaoya, rejecting the city lord of Xia Zhi City here, hooking up with the city lord of Qiu Zhi City, saying that the money earned by the city lord of Xia Zhi City was dirty money, while cooperating with her, and even flirting with her. Hypocrisy, stallion, archway, disgusting🤢

The main character is weak from the beginning to the end, and he basically eats the whole story. If he wants to have some strength, he has to spend money. Basically, he doesn't have any training from the beginning to the end. In the middle, the whole master is slightly promoted🤏🏻

Give tens of billions to a brother who has just taken over, and lend 1 billion to your family. What kind of logic is that?

The main character in this chapter is also written so disgustingly, right?

How should I put it? What is the author's positioning of the protagonist? In the introduction, it seems that the protagonist is the one behind the scenes, but you let him be exposed. Let me look at the front. The protagonist's character is based on the way modern people think, asking for help from the Holy Mother, but also agreeing to be stubborn and not cautious. He is enough for the enemy but not enough for the people around him. It is difficult to find the protagonist among millions of people! But I soon discovered it, and I was speechless at this discovery. But you, the person who sent it to Star Tower, went through your own hands and forced two people to be together, okay? I'm disgusted anyway. Is this alliance supposed to be a collaboration between multiple people? What's wrong? When alien races from the outside invade at any time, and they are still coaxing internally before they are sure, and the author himself said in the book that aliens are very irreversible, just like diseases, and they are not contagious. Why are they so exclusive? And there are some particularly powerful people among them, and there is also a planet that I cannot accommodate 100 million people. Even if they are gathered around a city, I can't re-draw them into a new area, and wouldn't it be easier to manage them if they have different identities? I'm really speechless, and it's rarely reversible, so aren't those high-level officials afraid of this day? Those who can become the top leaders of a force shouldn't be fools! There are also strange stone settings that are usually in the hand. If someone specializes in chopping hands, isn't that useless? Anyway, the current situation is full of troubles and they are very prominent, as if they are deliberately left to be solved by the protagonist. The enemy seems to be mentally ill as if he is ill, but the protagonist is not cautious and feels like he is being dumbed down. Moreover, the realm of this world is not very obvious. The author is deliberately downplaying the realm gap and exaggerating the power of strange stones. Doesn't the setting of the tavern indicate that this is a stronghold? And I remembered that the protagonists are half-intelligence agents, and they still make people sentient, and they also run live broadcasts, which gives me a headache. But the plot and descriptions can still be read, but you can't take it seriously, otherwise there will be many uncomfortable places.

To put it bluntly, the protagonist's personality is confusing, and the plot is inconsistent for the sake of water. What started out as motivation to start a business ended up being a gnawing at the old age. I just wrote that if I had money, I would do this or that, but as a result, when I had money, I would just be busy and do nothing. If you weren't the protagonist, you wouldn't be unjust if you died eight hundred times.

It's so well written, don't write it next time!

He is just a villain with extremely poor qualities. He borrows money without repaying it and is half-hearted.