Shock! My Online Dating Partner Can Travel Through the Past and Present

Overall, it's pretty good, but when Ye Sijin's soul was wearing it, she used someone else's body to cuddle and kiss Ling Chu. Although Ling Chu said that it was her soul that she loved, I couldn't accept it😭😭😭. The writing is really good and I like it very much. But if she was wearing it, I might like it more. I just express my own opinion, don't criticize me😭😭😭

The plot of the story is good, innovative, and the writing is so-so. It's awkward to watch in modern times. Whenever you chat, you guess which guy it is, and whenever you're in a bad mood, you quarrel with that guy. Everything revolves around wanting to fall in love, advising you to fall in love, guessing about falling in love, joking about falling in love... The heroine's description is silly and sweet, and the male protagonist's description is good. The ancient plot is also slow to advance. I can't stand it until I'm halfway through it. I'll save it now and read it when I'm short of books.

The beginning is too long-winded, we meet in chapter 21, and the heroine only realizes that he is an ancient person around chapter 30. The two communicated through a jade sign, but were disconnected several times. After that, the heroine was in a car accident and her soul traveled from modern times. Later, she fell off a cliff in ancient times and returned to modern times. Then she and the hero began to cross each other again in their true form. They also matched the hero's mother and the emperor's uncle. The flow of time between the two parties was very chaotic. The longest time they met was only once in 7 years. The female protagonist is a complete novice in every aspect, the male protagonist is a black lotus, and I don't know what he likes about her. As a time-traveling woman, she has no system, no golden fingers, and can't do anything in ancient times. She is also a bit of a virgin🤣. The male protagonist's mother and great-grandfather are from the present and the past, and the great-grandmother is from the past to the present. Later, a large space is devoted to the great-grandmother and the others. Ji Lanzhu and Ye Qingyue handled the plot very tediously, and it was painless every time🥲. This mother-in-law who gave the heroine her identity is so terrible. She really treated her like her own daughter. Why did she recognize her so early? Why don't you wait until the post-closure date is calculated before you admit it? Instead of forcibly adding cause and effect and describing a bunch of troublesome things, it would be better to write about the succession of the direct descendants clearly, but the result is that the direct descendants were briefly mentioned. I guess the author is not good at writing about power and strategy, so he only wrote about family fights.

Recently, the genre of ancient and modern articles has become more popular, and then I saw this book. It is actually quite innovative and not bad.

Occasionally, one or two chapters are transferred to each other, and another chapter is added. But after all, the male and female protagonists cannot fully understand the function and origin of the jade case. In addition, there is no last word about the person who murdered the heroine in modern times. The last chapter is about sacrifice, and there is no mention of who the person who murdered the heroine in the end was.