Proud Martial Arts, Nine Heavens

Can you please stop playing nesting dolls all the time? Every time you venture into a secret realm or change places in a tower, you can get together with a beautiful woman. Sometimes you can predict the plot behind it. If you are not saving the beautiful woman or helping the woman, you keep repeating this plot. I really can't stand it anymore.

The routine is too old. He saves beautiful women wherever he goes. Although I haven't read much about helping beauties, I can guess this kind of routine. From now on, it will always be a routine of fighting over jealous women.

The first part was pretty good, but towards the end it started to falter, especially the finale, which covered a large part of it in one go.

Hey, in current novels, the protagonist has cheats. Isn't it good to write about common people? I have to give him a second generation. The writing is nonsense. Even if the son of the sect leader is stupid, he is still a young master. When fighting a gou, it depends on the master. Can anyone point his nose and scold anyone in his turn? My father is still alive. What's the point of the second-in-command targeting the young master? It's really uncomfortable to watch. Today's novels are all in the same routine. It seems that they are all written by one person. There are so many openings and disasters. It is no longer easy to get resource upgrades alive. Tang Monk's Pursuit is not as hard as these male protagonists. I have read A Mortal's Legend of Immortality and The Perfect World, and I really can't read the current fantasy novels about immortality.

The protagonist is too useless to fight beyond the level. The protagonist is physically weak due to physical training, and has no resourcefulness.

At the beginning, it was said that the entire sect was built by the Chu family for hundreds of years, but the sect leader was in seclusion to heal his wounds, and the young sect leader lived like a dog, beaten and scolded at will, and it was difficult for the Chu family to have only two people. The son of an acting sect leader can be arrogant and domineering and form cliques, but the son of the real sect leader has been abused for several years and has no one to care about him. I can't stand it anymore.

The outline of this novel is pretty good, and it contains common elements of fantasy, such as various adventures and copies, and a competition between geniuses. The disadvantage is that the pace is too fast and there are too few details. For example, a county competition has just ended, and the next chapter will be a city competition. There are too few foreshadowings and details, and it feels like rushing to reincarnate. A good story will basically pay attention to the ups and downs. Also, there is no regularity in training. If the plot requires it, you will be upgraded to three or four levels at once. There are too few descriptions of the realm, which makes it easy for your combat power to collapse.

Mindless

The beginning was okay, but the ending was too hasty.

There are too many modern elements, minutes and seconds are modern elements and there are bullets. Is it because the author doesn't understand it or because he has poor background. It looks uncomfortable, as if I have eaten stinky peanuts, a failure!