Travelers in the Heavens

Do you know why no one reads it? People enjoy reading books. What you wrote is not good at all. You are a lone wolf and you are not a disciple. You are a good person. You have to travel through time anyway. What bond does you have with these people? You should do whatever it takes to achieve the goal. You don't have to be so bad. But why do you make your character so gentle? You are just grinding like a good old man. Mojiji makes me want to vomit. This time I will accept a female apprentice, and next time I will accept a bunch of female apprentices. Are there three thousand beauties in the harem? It's all your women who make up the time-traveling army, right? I didn't even want to say it at first. It's really disgusting to me. The first fifty chapters are okay. What kind of female apprentices should I accept later? One brother from the left and one brother from the right. Will he take her into the harem and take her through time later?

I couldn't stand it after reading more than 70 chapters. It was too watery. For example, how many chapters could be written about a fighting game, but in the end, the protagonist took out a sword. It's an old routine. First, a bunch of people belittle and ridicule the protagonist before the fight, and then a bunch of people are shocked after the fight. First, the audience is shocked, then the supporting characters, and even the sect leader is shocked. I just don't understand. The protagonist is at the first level. Why is it shocking that he has combat power beyond the first level? No matter how shocked it is, it's still the first level, so it's quite funny. Then the pace is too slow. What did you learn from traveling through a world? The time-traveling is completely uninspiring, with a lot of dialogue, like the sentence "I know you are in a hurry, but don't be in a hurry yet." Listening to the book makes people impatient.

Is there no heroine?

Is what you wrote about traveling through the world for the second time serious? I'm sure it's not an act of mental retardation

To be honest, this book is more grounded than most of Qimao's novels, and it's also very good and interesting. Although it has many minor flaws, they can be ignored.

It's so ink-filled. I've inked dozens of chapters in this martial arts world.

The taste of ancient novels. It was a good book five years ago Now? It's so cliché.

It's okay, a little wordy

Well enough

Zhutianliu Bar, which is on the horizontal line, is still worth reading. You can ignore the bad reviews. The two bad reviews are not very positive. The book is long and incomprehensible. The presence of the single heroine in the book is only longer than the early one. The short one can only be said to be outrageous. The second world of Dragon and Snake Romance, the modern world, A protagonist with a level of energy, and Kuroto didn't take advantage of that opening to hit him with a car, and his relationship with the eldest lady who had good achievements in the original work and was very talented was able to obtain a legal status and other sanctions for himself. Some of his actions seemed to be intellectually subversive, but the logic is self-consistent, and it makes sense if you think about it carefully.