Online Game Doomsday Sword Fairy

I originally thought that Wang Ying was the heroine, but after she was taken away by the tree man, I stopped writing about her and didn't appear until the last chapter.

After reading more than 100 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore. The subject matter is good and the overall background is okay, but the writing is too shitty. Let me list the super unreasonable things: 1. The protagonist is reborn with SSS-level talents, and he is only at the same level as the owner of a branch. You must know that the talent content can directly increase all attributes by one level. It is really exaggerated. 2. The protagonist is completely The advantages after rebirth have not been reflected. After more than 100 chapters, there are only a blacksmith and a logistics manager around you, and the healer has also gone to study on an alien planet. I want to ask you, you can't keep up with the rhythm of the big forces in the early stage. How can you catch up with the big forces' numerical advantage in the later stage? ? There is no brain or logic at all. 3. The setting of the protagonist's character is very problematic, his character is bad, and he has no city government. Not only does he forcibly reduce his intelligence in many places, but he also forcibly reduces his combat power. The subject matter is obviously very good, but he still wants to copy the Devouring Starry Sky. It is really tasteless and a pity to abandon it.

The writing is messy. After being reborn, I still have the strongest talent to act like this. The most important thing is that my character and behavior are like those of a child.

Divine gold

All the player resources agreed to are given by the will of the earth. What the hell is Thunder Martial Arts School? With the same starting point in the end of the world, why do we have so many resources of the will of the earth? The protagonist's talent is unbelievable. No matter how powerful he is, in the end he can't get past the next level. He has killed so many insects, opened so many boxes, has black iron weapons, and not a single piece of clothing. Any passerby has silver equipment. It makes no sense and is a mess. The protagonist's attribute increases by 2 points after absorbing crystals, and the attributes of others increase by more than 10 points. Are you smart? I give 6 points the most.

I have been reborn lonely, and I can only see one person at a time. "Ah, I remember, this person was so powerful and organized in his previous life." Apart from this, there is no other use. What about chance? What about plug-ins? The inexplicable rebirth gives the protagonist a brain rebirth, which is silly, right? In addition to gaining points at the beginning to gain a talent, there is no advantage in rebirth at all. The people you take in have to be taken care of by yourself just like you take in a group of dads. You can just call it a "rebirth nursing home in the doomsday". It's rubbish, bah!

Why is the rebirth SSS talent still so rubbish?

The subject matter is great and the background is quite grand. It's a pity, it's hard to write in one sentence

The protagonist behaves inexplicably, the villain forcibly subdues his wits, and the talent setting is contradictory. All attribute levels set by himself are increased by 1 level. The secondary set is already at level 5. He is still at level 4, which means he is still at level 3. I am playing.

The protagonist is reborn and adds SSS talents, but the result is so rubbish. Even if the army has just arrived in the apocalypse, it can only provide one or two people to the protagonist's level. As a result, an army and a martial arts school were invincible, so I asked them why?