Wizard Immortality

I have read more than 180 chapters and can't stand it anymore. There are many questions. The biggest problem is that I really don't understand why I want to write about a wizard. The protagonist relies on physical fitness + fighting spirit to fight. As for spells, what are they? After reading so many chapters, I can't remember a single spell name. They are all potion names. From the time the protagonist becomes a wizard, they are all There is nothing else about potions and medicines. Fighting relies on fighting spirit. If a wizard does not learn spells, why is he called a wizard? If he makes potions every day, he is called a pharmacist. Other books regard pharmacists as a side job. This book is written as the main job. Then why is the title of the book called Wizard Immortality? It would be more accurate to call it Pharmacist Immortality or Knight Immortality. Even if there is one at the end, I can't read it.

The author has a very good description of the worlds that the protagonist has visited, including the wizard world, the emerald world, the knight world, the natural disaster world, and the world of gods. It is a pity that he only briefly mentions the origin world.

The writing is quite good, but there is one problem. Author, don't you think it was written too fast? To slow down the speed, it would take more than 900 episodes. A great knight in his 20s, a second-level great magician, no matter how terrifying his talent is, it would be impossible for him to be like this, right?

The first half is okay, but the second half is not. Also, this book does not reflect the characteristics of wizards at all. Most of them are about blood and knights' methods. The characteristics of time travel and exploration can be interesting, but the soul travel in the later part is boring. The characteristics of wizards are to hunt everything, including gods, and then dissect, learn, simulate, and then create their own skills. This book does not reflect it at all. The protagonist relies on swords to cut and blood, and later becomes a god. So in the end, it was written that it was not good at time travel and exploration, not good at hunting, creation and learning, and not very good at plane warfare. It just wanted everything, but everything was average.

Personally speaking, the author's writing is very good, and the protagonist and supporting characters are vividly portrayed, but I don't really like the trumpet part in the middle.

The only thing that I find difficult to bring into the game is the mid-term Soul Transmutation and the Children of the World.

So pretty

I suggest you change it to Knight Immortal. The first 200 chapters are all cut with swords. The white-robed swordsman, right?

Overall, the writing is dull. The protagonist has no hobbies, women, power, food, drink, or beautiful scenery. He just wants to practice and become stronger, and has no pursuit of becoming stronger. Before time travel, he was an old bachelor who only knew 996 jobs. When he traveled to the wizarding world, he was also a high-level bachelor who only pursued hard training. Such a life is really bleak and meaningless.

It should be rated higher, maybe 8.5 Points! The first few worlds are well conceived! But in the later stage, levels seven and eight are no longer interesting! It would be nice to finish this novel sooner!