Global Game Evolution

I feel that the skills of the protagonist are useless. The ghost eye is master-level. The protagonist also said that people with stronger willpower cannot control it. That skill can only control miscellaneous soldiers. The love chapter made me embarrassed. When I followed the boss-style strategy taught by the teacher, I was so embarrassed that I skipped to read the rest. The Martian Alien said that it uses dust explosions to deal with cockroaches. The world where I co-authored it didn't even know about dust explosions and didn't have any flour.

How can I put it this way? Pig's Knuckle's character is not well developed, he always looks very cunning, and the plot connection is not good either.

How can I put this? The protagonist gave me the impression that he has a changeable personality and is almost thinking about creatures with his lower body (the kind that looks like a stallion but not like it. The beautiful woman who entered the game earlier seems to have something to do with it, and then he planted it. When he got to the game city, he also planted it in reality. At the end, well, I had feelings for her and got married (to a woman). Maybe I skipped more than 400 chapters and went directly to the end). It involves a lot of that kind of things but I will briefly mention it. When there is a beautiful woman, it's almost like a hero saves the beauty or takes the beautiful woman through the level, and then he has a crush on her and then hooks up with her. He has the ability but pretends, but the pretending is not complete. By the way, I also feel that except for the protagonist, other game players have brains wrapped in cerebellum and cannot think about game prompts at all, just like the protagonist. The protagonist's knowledge of intelligence is almost zero (no intelligence at all), and he doesn't know what level his strength is. He looks like a novice but has strength (because he is a time traveler). It can be regarded as a mindless novel. The protagonist is invincible anyway, and the beauty does not affect his own performance. The female characters are almost all strong-willed, such as admiring the protagonist.

Strength is in confusion, skills are in confusion, the game has been around for hundreds of years, and the country is still like this

It was good in the early stage, but in the later stage when I went to Game City, my combat power collapsed too much. A lot of plots in the middle are rushed, and the whole book ends at an anticlimax.

The more I read, the more boring it becomes. After the college entrance examination, there is actually a psychological test and some disgusting questions. What did the author think? He has nothing to do.

If the protagonist adds skill attribute points to the fourth dimension from the beginning, and only needs one ghost domain, do other skills need to be upgraded? He will be invincible, and it will be a waste of so many attribute points.

The dungeon is also equivalent to a world. If you just run away after playing it, you would be a scumbag if you don't explain it. The further you go, the more you can't stand it anymore.

It's really awesome to write a dog-licking thing.

Come on Tie Zi💪 and bring us better and more exciting works. Thank you!