Shocking Martial Ancestor

First of all, I haven't finished reading it, and I've only seen more than 400 chapters. The writing in the early stage is relatively good, all kinds of foreshadowing can be recycled, the protagonist's character is also good, and the plot is also very interesting. The mid-term was not very satisfactory. There were many low-level mistakes and the plot was very bland. It was basically written around the competition between humans and demons, but the plot was unevenly distributed. The selection of talents within the human race was okay, but the writing of the final battle between humans and demons was extremely perfunctory. This game was related to the future of the two races, but there was not even an audience to judge the senior leaders of each race. Just two elders and ten geniuses from each race competed in a wasteland. Basically the protagonist is fighting, which is very embarrassing. The biggest problem in the middle period is that there are no new characters joining the protagonist's team. It has been written around the three protagonists. There is no freshness and no motivation to continue reading. It is far different from the previous plot. I also looked through the later table of contents and the problem still persisted, and I abandoned the book because of this.

Kaiwen scene is not better for the small town. It's the Imperial City at the beginning, and here comes the Eight Heroes, who are only at the third level of body tempering. Where's the Imperial Brigade from the Eighth Family? Even if you run away after your family is wiped out, you won't remain anonymous. If it weren't for the protagonist, he wouldn't be able to survive even one chapter.

This! Indivual! Book! Looks a bit down! Wisdom! He actually got nine points! It seems that the person who wrote this book has many names! Farewell! Be careful!

Chapter 30: Showing off one's power, the ones in front are all bullshit, the ones behind are ignored.

The hero's family was wiped out, which is directly related to the hero. If you don't be a good person, you will be a licking dog, and you will lick the family away.

The plot is confusing and many plots are illogical. So much nonsense.

Overall, it's pretty good, with a beginning and an end, unlike many novels that are just trying to make up the word count and end up completely unfinished! Nice novel!

The protagonist practices the most advanced exercises, the most advanced martial arts, and becomes invincible, but cannot achieve invincibility in the same situation. It is really boring, so I suggest you give up.

It looks good, the main plot is smooth, the plot is ups and downs, and exciting. It's good. I hope to publish more works.

The full text is comprehensive, evil cannot defeat good, and although there are flaws, they cannot cover up the good.