The Xiuxian Maiden Is Very Innocent

In the early stage, the people around the heroine looked like pedophiles

It's a mess, and the first half feels like a scramble for opportunities. . . No grabbing. . . Basically just take it. It's as plain as an outline. It was originally a pretty good setting. The male protagonist is a mermaid, and the female protagonist seizes the opportunity of the female protagonist, wears off her luck, and then goes to a higher interface to find her parents. However, this writing is really a mess, which is a pity.

This book has no positive female characters except for the heroine, which is really amazing. The heroine has been targeting other women, feeling that she is superior, and looking down on the female counterpart. As for the female supporting characters, it's really amazing. The female supporting characters are all stupid and have no self-awareness. It's 2024 and it's quite speechless to still see such charming novels🤦‍♂️The male characters are all good, the female characters...

How did this rating come about? Without mentioning typos, let's just say that the plot is bland. The character of the heroine is that of a person who is taken care of by a big boss. She has a strong background and can pick up any opportunities. Her cultivation level will rise with whatever she eats. No matter who she is fighting with, her sword energy will come out and she will be invincible in any field. All the sword cultivation skills I have seen before have been in vain.

Going beyond the plot and talking about writing style, why does the author always type "get" as "get"? Didn't the author notice such obvious errors throughout the entire text?

The heroine has all kinds of people making trouble for her. The hero has many women who love him. He only loves the heroine. Alas, I have read more than 300 chapters and it is a pity to abandon her.

The plot is just a skeleton, and the author adds superfluous things to it. From a small four-legged animal, it became a centipede, and the centipede leg was still broken (referring to some developments that were suddenly broken, it only said that "unexpected results were produced", but nothing was written) The character creation is too general, without any distinctive characteristics, and is blunt. The world view is copied mechanically, without any opinions of my own. I just copy whatever I see on male videos cultivating immortality.

Hey, female rivalry, and I feel like the heroine is a bit too violent. . . Kill anyone who blocks the way. . . In the early days, men were like smelting copper.

Bland, a bit competitive, unfinished

Ah ah, is there any extra story? I want to see Ming Huo Xin and Luo Wanning! ! ! !