After Thirty Years as a Menial in the Immortal Doctor's Valley, I Ascended by Day

The plot design is okay, but the character of the protagonist is unflattering and full of bastard style. His attitude towards the sect is to be as industrious as he can, to be stoic as long as he can, and to consider running away if there is any danger. He is an extremely selfish person. In addition, there is a bit of bullshit explanation over and over again, for fear that readers will not understand it, and the number of words is too obvious. I read halfway through and turned to the back to see the ending, which is very average.

The protagonist is human, he has no blood at all, so you have to be careful about everything.

Three hundred thousand years of immortal power is not as good as someone who has cultivated tens of thousands

. . It's all about water. . A few lines of words to introduce a magical elixir. Then take a look at your character attributes after a while. It's disgusting to look at. After reading more than 10 chapters, I didn't want to read anymore. . Lightning protection that I want to see

A character panel, realm, weapons, etc. Are all inferior. Even if it can kill the strongest person in this world, it is still inferior. In the eyes of a saint, it is inferior. Then you write about the realm of chicken feathers.

As light as water

①Too watery ②Too useless.

The name is nondescript, why doesn't it kill the doctor's nerves? ? ?

There are too many flowing words and no ups and downs in the writing style.

Too watery