She No Longer Works as a Female Partner in Period Literature

I just watched the first world. The heroine took away the prey in someone else's trap and said, "Whoever sees it belongs to whoever"?? What kind of three views does that look like? The fact that you have a system and a plot is already a huge advantage to others. Wouldn't you make a trap yourself to get prey? In those days, if you took away other people's prey, wouldn't it be equivalent to taking away other people's food rations and materials to optimize life? It's crazy that this kind of person can be the protagonist... They have similar outlooks to the original male and female protagonists. They are both half-hearted and selfish people.

Feeling a mess In the 1950s, a monthly salary of 90? How can it be that high? Just 1800 casually So fake The heroine feels useless The person doing the task is actually illiterate I can't even write the word cook ✍️ The original protagonist's husband clearly cheated on her during their marriage. The mistress took over and no one said anything In those days, I really didn't see anything like this. He even signed a contract to help the mistress laugh as his original wife And the writing is messy Why do they always write about her going to the mountains to catch animals? There were other people's traps, so she just picked them up and ran away? You can just go to the mountain and catch it yourself. It's not like you're incapable. And the heroine said she has a golden finger, why is it always black? There's no way to get it for nothing And she said she would be 65 as soon as she entered In those days, wages were really not that high. I heard my dad say that when he was working in 1980 It's only a few dozen a month, which is pretty high. So wages couldn't have been that high in the 1950s Can you check the chronology before writing? Don't be so outrageous.

Since she discovered one trap, she has discovered several more traps one after another, each of which is hidden and must be passed by small animals. Not only every day, but also every once in a while, she can gain something. Zhu Yun (the heroine) has no sense of guilt for stealing the fruits of other people's labor. It belongs to anyone who sees it. She usually only takes the prey from one trap and leaves the others alone. Excerpted from the text

The first plane looks good. The second one started to feel awkward.

The heroine will not avenge the original owner. She is stepped on in the face time and time again. She either endures it or just speaks harshly. She is such a loser. He has a strong background, but a weak reputation, and he doesn't have any golden fingers. Does he appear to be in love? I read a few stories, but they started in an anticlimax and ended in a tailspin. Each story was detailed in detail, and then suddenly ended.

Under the banner of period writing, the content is not at all in line with the characteristics of that era. Thousands and tens of thousands of dollars were spent on all kinds of home appliances and catering. In the 1950s and 1960s, it was really dizzying. There were too many loopholes in the plot and they were not filled in. It was unreadable.

Abandoned half of the book, the plot is confusing, it's like writing a running account

This book has exciting parts and some slow parts, but overall it's pretty good. After all, I could read it from beginning to end. Maybe it's because I prefer period novels, and I can read it for fun when I'm short on books. The author was not very detailed in writing, and many places were not explained at the end. The torture was not very focused, and the process was a bit slow. Therefore, many people said that it was too frustrating and could not handle the subsequent torture part. This part was indeed a bit slow. The female protagonists are hard-working, and Golden Finger is not very powerful, so most of them are only a little better than ordinary people, so torturing scumbags is not easy, but overall they are positive. Since I read it without skipping chapters, I give it a good review!

It's very interesting, the male and female protagonists are both clean, both are strong, not abusive, both are sweet, I highly recommend it, anyway, I quite like this kind of happy writing.

I saw the second story. In order to protect herself, the heroine used the hero as a shield and had to keep his integrity (in fact, no one knew her at all), while teasing her little brother in the concert hall. It's disgusting to see