Bai Yueguang Disguised as Her Brother's Rival

The first part is very good, very exciting and interesting, but the middle part, starting from four years later, is mostly written by the mother-in-law, which is a bit intellectual and not interesting. Jiang Xiaocha's thoughts are also surprising, why should the grievances of the previous life be brought into this life? Just because I was coaxed and deceived by Song Hanyuan in my last life, I have to stay away from him in this life? Her arrival has changed everything that will happen in this world, and after getting along with Song Hanyuan, didn't she find that his nature is not bad, and he is just and brave to protect his children? After recovering his memory, he had to stay away from Song Hanyuan inexplicably. This was really irritating and intellectually depressing. Also, the emotional line between Jiang Moli and Xia Qingtong repeated the path of the previous novels. He opened his mouth and couldn't say anything. Wouldn't it be better to explain everything? Song Hanyuan just told Jiang Moli that Xia Qingtong was his sister, right? In this way, they don't have any big grudges. The emotional line between the two protagonists is directly smooth, and there is no need to fight and curse. The previous writing is really good, and the heroine is so cool. I didn't skip the plot at first, but starting from "Four Years Later", I really couldn't stand it, especially the emotional line between the two couples. Since Jiang Xiaocha didn't object to Xia Qingtong being his sister-in-law, why didn't he help? And why would Jiang Moli, a silly boy, eat alone with his childhood sweetheart? I couldn't stand the sight of Xia Qingtong being alone with someone of the opposite sex, so why would I want to be with someone of the opposite sex? Isn't this a stupid thing? Jiang Xiaocha saw it and didn't remind Jiang Moli. I was really angry. Also, why did Song Hanyuan lie to Jiang Xiaocha? His feelings for her were just a show of love. They were originally together, but when he said this again, he wanted to skip the plot. The only two biggest shortcomings of this book are the relationship between the two couples and the heroine's inexplicable intelligence reduction. 😅

I'm quite satisfied. The male protagonist and the female protagonist had a misunderstanding in their previous life and died unjustly. Fortunately, there was an explanation later. If the male protagonist didn't like the female protagonist in the previous life, I would definitely give a bad review. What kind of love brain are you talking about? Fortunately, it was a misunderstanding. What I like most is that I only gave birth to a girl. There was no talk about having a son and a daughter, nor was there anything about accidentally getting pregnant with another child. Just a family of three, which is pretty good

I was so angry that I forgot to leave a negative review [guilty]

It is boring to read and a pity to discard. . I've watched more than half of it, and somehow I'm graduating from college four years later? After all, he must be just a junior in college... I almost finished my PhD in four years, and my IQ is also on point... Why did he forcibly lose his intelligence after coming back from New York? It looked like a fool. It made me numb when I saw it. It was an inexplicable plot. . And the relationship between the male and female protagonists is also inexplicable, (ーー;)

Isn't Jiang Xiaocha going through many worlds soon? Why is he still so useless? Shouldn't he have some fighting skills?

I advise you not to read later. Jiang Yinyin, the heroine's family, has lived a good life in the heroine's family for so many years. The heroine's life in the country is not good. It is clear that the heroine came back and gave her adoptive mother a large sum of money to buy out the relationship. Jiang Yinyin also went back later. The heroine's family has always indulged the adoptive mother's family and caused all kinds of things. The heroine's family has a mother's heart and is troublesome and spoils the adoptive mother's family. And later on, the heroine is with the hero who hurt her in the previous life. The heroine is obviously powerful. Every time the hero does something to her, it is written that the heroine cannot resist, which makes her laugh to death. Moreover, the female protagonist has obviously lived two lifetimes. She really doesn't understand the little thoughts of the male protagonist, and the changes in the things he does. Is she always led by the male protagonist? I feel that this novel is really illogical.

Sisters, here are the highlights that I have listed for you. I believe that I will not trick you: 1. The heroine has traveled through many small worlds, but without any means, it is very frustrating to watch. Especially when it comes to treating family members, you may be nice, but you cannot control the overall situation. She knew the plot, but she didn't know how to avoid risks for her mother and brother. This resulted in the plot dragging and even boring in the middle. 2. The arrangement of the male supporting cast is not reasonable, I like Fu's caution. 3. Start high and go low, and the ending is a bit perfunctory. The main reason is that both Fu and the heroine know the direction of the previous life, but neither of them has the preparation or sense of worry to cut wood. This is not true for adults who have experienced a lot of mental hardships. Sisters, overall, I give 5 stars for the author's creativity. But in terms of cool writing, I can only give it 1 star.

I saw the heroine four years ago: An Xin Four years later, I saw the heroine: I gave up.

Very very very🗑️, I haven't seen such a bad novel in a long time👎

Emm... How should I put it? There are things that I like about this book, and there are also some things that make me uncomfortable (don't criticize, I'm just telling my book friends about my own feelings) In the early stage, it was about the heroine who originally wanted to end the time travel, but ended up in this world, and then wanted to live according to her own wishes, avoiding many plots in the original book... But in fact, many places can be guessed, such as this world is the heroine's original world, etc. I can only say that the author's plot is quite reasonable, but it is not very novel, but overall it is still very good. But, in the later stage, uh... It was a bit disconnected when the heroine left for four years for no reason. I couldn't understand why the heroine had to go abroad incognito after the car accident, even without telling her close friends. Also, the hero's personality changed from boring to coquettish, and later on he became a bit forced to love (so I was actually addicted to the heroine and the second actor😈)