The Most Spring Breeze

It can be a good article, but it's a pity that it goes into too much detail, and the heroine is very contradictory. To make it clear in one sentence, you need to write 3 paragraphs, for fear that readers will not understand. Judging from the first 15%, the heroine deserved to die in her previous life, and she didn't know where her brain was. In this life, I am sometimes smart and sometimes confused, and I don't understand.

Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I still want to recommend Rebirth, which is probably an ancient Chinese novel. It is also written in detail. There are many characters in the novel, the plot is complex, and the language is steady and appropriate. It shows that the author has a wide range of knowledge.

I was tricked into this by classification, it's not easy at all, but it's true that it looks good.

The heroine is sometimes too pretentious

The writing is not bad, but I write more about the past life than the current life.

It's just a bit long-winded. The plot is well written. Can't we finish the story before rebirth in one go? There are too many characters. The game is a bit big and I don't feel like I can play it well.

I started to get pregnant and have a baby last year, and my life became irritable. After reading your novel, I slowly became calmer. I really like the plot of this kind of novel that is light and controlled.