I Add a Dot to Everything

In the early stage, this book was thought to be a daily text, but later it was written as a business and war text. Also, there are too many ambiguous girls. Maybe it's because I can have an affair with so many girls that I haven't established a relationship with any of them.

In the end, they opened a harem, which was a failure. It's better to just have a single heroine, and you can still get a bite after eating them all till the end💩

The whole book is okay, but the main character is a eunuch, and he didn't confirm his relationship with the heroine until almost 96% of the way through the book.

Nice!

Plot: The addition is not the main plot, the early stage is a little watery, and the later stage... Ends hastily. Characters: In the early stage, most of the descriptions were about the appearance of the opposite sex, and I didn't know what I wanted to express. For items that have been added, such as mobile phones, the author has made it clear that she can study online, but PS said that the functions will not be very powerful. Every item seems to be useful, but in fact it is dispensable. Call it nonsensical and funny, but now that it is nonsensical, it is said to be a harem story, but it has turned into a palace story... It looks very depressing, and it is neither Zhang Xiaohua, nor Ji Cha, nor an elbow. As for the far pupil... The four-unlike essay... Let's read it as a short composition.

The failure is that the parents are not introduced in the entire book, and they are not mentioned even when they are rich and prosperous! ! !

I can only say a lot about this novel! ! ! Giving good reviews is just for brothers to see (Don't look!!! Don't look!!! Don't look!!!) Drive high and go low, half of the plot is water. The main character in the whole text has no online IQ

The first two to three hundred chapters are pretty good. The words "water" are all behind! ! ! The mess is all trivial and trivial, with no main line, no goal, and even the plot of the enemy is not included! ! ! The score has been lowered, and the perfect score will be reduced to 20 points out of 100! ! !

When the faucet comes out, it is forcibly depressing. Drink five hundred grams of thousand-mesh gold powder mixed with water. Gastric lavage and suction directly. There are five tons of gold water. Two thousand kilograms of gold.

It was okay in the early stage The later writing was a mess, with all kinds of inconsistencies. I also want to write about whether the countries and brands that exist in reality can be called uniformly. I will write this now and then that.