Became the Immortal King from the Demon Slayer Dungeon

I feel like it won't be interesting after destroying the temple. I was originally talking about invincible writing! And the treatment of the Crown Princess is really awkward! It's not that she was forced to give away her daughter because she liked the protagonist but the protagonist didn't like her, but that the princess and the prince didn't have much affection for each other, and they didn't spend much time together. Later, they left the earth realm, which can be said to be a new life. Later, they left the heaven realm and went to the snow realm, breaking away from the two worlds. The author still wrote that he wanted to force her back and send her to the prince's side. Two people who don't have much affection, you suddenly write a deep love for them! ! It looks so awkward! You write a story about a prince who wants to pursue her by himself, and plans to fall in love with her again. That is also a scene from the crematorium of chasing his wife in the city. How you handle it is really embarrassing!

Let's not talk about the plot. The first thing is the division of this realm. There are not many realms, but there will still be some particularly outrageous realm-related numerical errors. The most egregious thing is that, whether it is accidental or clever, many chapters are published with the name of the previous chapter changed. The chapter numbers are not changed, such as 138, 187, chapter. Maybe it's because I haven't read much online articles, and this is the first time I've seen this happen. The plot is just enjoyable throughout, with no highlights, but nothing too bad. The writing is average, and it's generally quite satisfactory, but the behavior of repeating chapters is really cheap.

The first half of the book is mindless and exciting. You kill and level up along the way to a low level but you are invincible. It is more enjoyable to read. After destroying the temple, the plot becomes very embarrassing. When you bring back your acquaintances from the lower world to expand your power, it feels like writing without a plan. I feel that the author has exhausted the outline and details by that time and is writing as he pleases, here and there. The plot often fails to fill in the gaps later, and the author is quite embarrassed to write emotional scenes. Not to mention the female shopkeeper who has always had a deep affection for the protagonist and followed him all the way. Murong Qing also handled it a bit strangely, but it is understandable. The two mythical beasts and the little maid that the protagonist acquired had to be stressed many times and he would not let them go or let them go. I was really speechless.

There is a problem with the logic. For example, the soul mentioned above is too weak to control the physical body. But is there any problem when the physical body tries hard to create the soul? In the Demon Realm like Earth, the combat power is higher than that of the Lieyang Peak, and the space collapses, but there are demons in it that are better than the King of the Sealed Realm.

Everything else is fine. But if you don't know how to write emotional lines, don't write them. It's so disturbing to watch.

Invincible flow, the theme concept is also relatively good, and it looks pretty good. But the writing style is not very good, and the language expression ability is still weak, so some plots seem a bit wretched, and the middle and late stages are also a bit long-winded, a bit watery, and the ending is too hasty.

Garbage Stallion

The plot of the story is too slow. When I read the title, I thought it was a cool novel in which the main character rises all the way to the top without any clues. However, it turned out to be a multi-front battle and the fight was not very good. The killings were not decisive. The plots and plots were just like children playing house. It was really confusing and disgusting to watch.

I came to see people killing monsters and killing people, and you actually wrote about conspiracies and conspiracies? This is a world where the strong have self-esteem

There is no focus, the layout of the event is very general, it should not only appear that the protagonist is more attractive to the opposite sex, but also does not really hook up, it is hypocritical!