The World of Gods Rises from the Zerg

To be honest, the writing and plot alone cannot make me give a bad review. After all, it is not easy for the author, and he is all about living. However, after I saw Chapter 528 about the death of the protagonist's grandfather, I decisively chose to abandon the book, and there was this bad review. It's understandable that the protagonist is low-key, but it's off-putting to be low-key. People in his own family either don't recognize him. Since he agrees, why don't they see each other? His relatives are injured and there are things that can be treated but they don't dare to try, which eventually leads to death. I don't understand why the author created such a protagonist. Is it because we have traveled through the past? Isn't our current society no longer humane?

The logic is poor, it's super cluttered, there are too many introductions, repeated introductions, a dozen or so sentences that don't mean the same thing in one sentence, and the writing is unclear in many places, and it's a mess! ! The sense of immersion is extremely poor! I can only watch the plot while jumping!

I came across this book too late. I really can't understand why some people think this book is average.

It sucks, you know that? Becoming stronger requires scientific planning. You see, the Dragon Kingdom was poor at the beginning, then planned the first five-year plan and the second five-year plan, and now it has reached the pinnacle of Blue Star in just a few decades. Are you afraid that the novel will end in chapter thirty or forty? He is a lousy player with a good hand of cards and doesn't understand scientific development at all. He is just like a stick maker. Who tells you that there is a contradiction between emotion and scientific planning? In order to get revenge on my ex-girlfriend who left me behind, I passed the 985 master's degree program through the science program and slapped her in the face. Why can't I be more scientific?

The plot is very delicate, and the growth trajectory of the protagonist is also very clear. He is the kind of character who makes a fortune silently, and the author is also very imaginative. The problem is that it is too verbose. It can be explained clearly in 3 or 4,000 words, but when it is filled in more than 7,000 words, there are too many repetitive words. Many times, I thought that the page number was wrong and I went back to the front. And if you repeat it too many times, your left and right brains will sometimes fight with each other. In the past, you said you should be low-key and then you said you should be high-profile. In the past, you said that too many resources are consumed and it hurts. If you succeed in the future, it is just a drop in the bucket. The inconsistency seems uncomfortable. The previous evaluation was after only reading a little, but now I can only say it is average.

It seemed fine in the early days, but at most I felt that there were vests everywhere. Nowadays, novels are like various apps, and whatever the author thinks of or learns from, he can just use various plug-ins. The feeling of familiarity is like standing on the beach facing the sea. In the later stage, "How can such a messy word be so messed up!" A hodgepodge, a big platter!

The protagonist's characters are blindly conflicted, and the plot setting is completely chaotic. The original setting of the umbrella is a group of bandits gathered together. (The protagonist) also repeatedly said that he is not a kind person in the first place, which is even more outrageous than taking off his pants and farting. ≈ Taking off his pants to shit, he smelled it and said it smelled very bad.

The fighter jets in Xiaobai's article are also quite good-looking, and are a great way to pass the time.ヾ(^▽^*)))

You can trust me that I have a good-looking batch. The composition is full and full of life. The plot is also very good. The race is Zerg at the beginning, then dwarves, undead and dragons are introduced, and then the last one is undead, and the undead rebel. Anyway, the composition is very clear and the characters are the same. This is fun. I have brushed it several times.

More than two hundred chapters, a little cruel