Space Cultivation: The Reborn Orphan Girl Strikes Back

All the detailed descriptions are graphic, and the plot is logical and good-looking. The only regret is that there is no CP. Dumei. When I was in the self-cultivation world, I thought it was Tianjun. When I was in the fairy world, I thought it was the palace guard. Nothing.

A 4.46 Million word article on cultivating immortality is quite long. The middle of the four stages is the battle between the Tianjian Sect in the Immortal Realm and the Zerg in the Seven Directions Immortal Realm. There are not many scenes between the mortal world and the divine world as the beginning and end. The overall evaluation is average. In terms of advantages, the writing is smooth and there are few typos. Most of the plot motivations are sufficient, the characters behave logically, and sometimes the slightly stilted plot is patched up immediately afterwards. It is relatively proficient in the use of interspersed flashbacks, multi-line parallelism, etc., And the excessive repetition of sentence patterns is not high, and it looks natural and not abrupt. The result of this is that this article has a grand world view (for a 4 million-word female-channeled fairy tale), and the supporting characters, partners, pets, and weapon spirits in each stage of the four worlds have lines and relatively appropriate roles. The overall structure is neat and not disorderly. The concept and core conflict are quite satisfactory, and it is a qualified web article. As for the shortcomings, it may be that due to the time when it was written, the depiction of the heroine's rebirth in the first mortal world (prologue) is a bit archaic and not direct enough. I feel like it would be better to resolve it within 50 chapters, and to make the reasons for holding back and not killing him outright clear. Because the description is unclear, the heroine seems hesitant, which is difficult for some readers to accept. The chapter on the world of cultivating immortals is not a big problem. It is the highlight of this article. The characters are vivid and vivid, and the plot is compact and tense. The problem exposed at this stage is that the timeline has not been patched. Some timeline foreshadowings (statements such as press not to show) do not match the time when the subsequent plot arrives. This problem exists in both the Cultivation World and the Immortal World chapters. When entering the trap in the fairyland chapter, there is less psychological portrayal of the heroine, and the whole person is cold. In the subsequent plot, the character descriptions also tend to be facial expressions. The big boss battle in the Cultivation World Chapter is well written, full of twists and turns and touching moments. However, the big boss battle in the Immortal Realm chapter feels like taking drugs, zooming in, and defeating the boss in one chapter, lacking a sense of hierarchy. The description of the crush from another world is secretive. If it is a non-CP novel, you can reject it openly. If it is a romance novel, you can secretly develop feelings for a long time. But if you hint that the person will go home directly, it seems that the handling is not decisive enough. The ending of the Immortal World chapter is about becoming a god, which is a good article. The continuation of the God Realm chapter brought down the overall perception of the article. I don't know what the author's considerations were, but the second half of the Immortal World chapter and the entire Divine World chapter are extremely fast-paced. The God Realm chapter was even more ridiculously fast. The enemy heroine in the previous episode was killed by a stratagem. The enemy No. 2 Was killed in a duel with a sword. The person behind it even died of conspiracy and committed suicide on his own initiative. Although you are very strong, as the big boss of the 400,000-word conspiracy, you have to fight in the dark. It takes some process and some losses to be worthy of the previous scene. As soon as the person behind him was killed, he started to eat snakes. After tens of millions of years, he didn't know what to say. He didn't see any changes in the heroine. It was like a hot chick at the end. Finally, the biggest drawback of this article is, who is the fateful opponent, the silver-haired man?? Not the suitor from the world next door, right?? It's scary to suddenly appear after tens of millions of years. The sudden stop had no lingering effect at all, and all that was left was shock. Overall, it is an article that can be read, and the evaluation is average. Personal opinions are for reference only.

Super beautiful article about cultivating immortality! Start cultivating immortality after being reborn in modern times, and then go to the world of immortality, immortality, and gods! The plot is full of ups and downs, with undercurrents surging, and the heroine is calculating and working hard step by step!

The story is good-looking and the plot is also very exciting. It tells the story of the heroine's journey from the mortal world to the divine world. The lack of CP is probably due to the heroine's spiritual roots. At the end of the story, a silver-haired man with CP was forcibly added (Bei Minghan). The low rating is probably because the heroine is like a workaholic, which makes readers wonder why she is still cultivating immortality if she is so tired...

This heroine likes to give good things to her enemies

It's been a long time since I've read a book that kept me up late at night. It's interlocking, funny, touching, and has an ups and downs plot. It's great👍🏻

I'm really convinced. The heroine is still the same brain after being reborn. She only learns lessons but doesn't remember them.

This author is misogynistic, and the female characters are either prostitutes or have the status of maids. Appearance is emphasized in a large space. Women compete with women for appearance, and those with men have become immortals. We are still in a patriarchal society, and the role of your little wife and pet has not yet come out.

I don't quite understand why the heroine gave her best friend a set of magnolia jewelry. Her best friend has past life memories. What she knows about are the earrings and necklaces. The other two items were not even seen by the heroine in her previous life. Are you not superfluous by giving these four items?

The first plot is pretty good, but I don't like the later settings. Overall, it's pretty good.