Cultivation Begins with Three Years of Time Travel

It's all mixed up, it's not clear what it is, it's not clear whether it's about cultivating immortals or cultivating martial arts, it's all mixed up, the thinking is very unclear, and there's a big problem with the expression! Bad review!

It's so watery, I have to repeat a sentence ten times. That panel is useless, why are you writing about it?

The author finished writing the protagonist's fight and killed people normally, and then wrote it again from the opponent's perspective. It also adds to the inner dynamics of both parties, which makes it quite embarrassing to watch. One or two chapters are just finished. There were also several times when the protagonist discussed things with others and wrote a meeting. What they said, just one sentence, no one else can know what they said. Then the next chapter explains who came to see the protagonist and what they said and what they said. The word count just keeps getting lower. Every move and style of the protagonist must be explained every time it is used, how it is achieved, and how powerful it is in the current state. Every time I use it, I say it makes me afraid of the protagonist fighting. When fighting, you have to read the instructions for use, and it feels a bit like a sequel to Journey to the West. Saying one thing repeatedly from different perspectives makes it more and more embarrassing.

It's too watery. It's been pulled over and over again. In one sentence, one content must be read by everyone. For example, if someone is jealous until he is powerful and then admires it, he can't be jealous. After shopping around, at least 4.5 People were like this. At least 2.3 Chapters will be written. There are more than 200 chapters of 9 heavy (equivalent to Qi training) Qi training 9 and 200 chapters were rewritten. This progress is too watery, but it is okay to pass the book shortage. Not the kind of Long Aotian, nor the kind who lives in the sewers

This author is too arrogant. Each sentence contains nearly a chapter of inner drama. The content is not much, and the inner monologue takes up more than half of it. Let's talk about that golden finger. It looks like there is a golden finger, but in fact it is just a comparison table and is of no use at all.

A story written in a lower realm than the initial realm is as easy to answer as destroying the world.

I can't stand watching Chapter 542 anymore. Abandoned

The framework of this book is large enough and the writing is delicate. There is a section where the male protagonist describes the loneliness of looking back and not having an old friend anymore. It made me cry and made me depressed for a whole day. It's also clearly organized and doesn't have the greasy, disgusting emotional drama of male videos, so I quite like it. The only thing I didn't like was that there was too much exposition in it, which seemed a bit superficial, so I skipped it when I encountered it later.

Wc, the male protagonist has been obsessed with it and has been complaining about the word "water". He can talk about time travel for three years and can keep talking. The key point can be said once. He can talk about three or four sides every other page. Is it necessary to keep repeating it?

Very general, talks a lot, can't put it into words