The First Dude

In fact, the writing style is quite good, the story themes are relatively novel, and there are no frustrating plots. But the description of the heroine makes people physically uncomfortable. The heroine likes beauties, which is not a big problem, but the description makes her feel like a perverted nymphomaniac. He would either kiss or touch the smaller male protagonist, hold her in his arms and sit on his lap, even sleep with her arms around him, and verbally tease other beautiful men. Although it is always said in the article that the heroine has clear eyes when teasing a man, but she is more passionate than polite. Although she is a dandy prince, she does not need to behave in such a perverted female gangster way. This is not a rude dandy, or even a nymphomaniac, but a nasty and perverted one. The so-called dandy in ancient times was not just someone who flirted with cats and dogs and behaved arrogantly. In fact, one must have a good family background, be proficient in the six arts, and be good at both civil and military arts, and then he can be called a dandy. It does not mean that someone with a certain virtue or a cat or a dog can be called a dandy. The author's writing style can be used from various angles, but he is described as a perverted pervert, which is puzzling. I approve of the author's writing style and think the subject matter is good, but I really don't like the character design.

I saw chapter 2425, the two got married, and I read the remaining chapters. I saw that the souls of the male and female protagonists went to modern times. I didn't like reading it. I thought the ending was the end. It was very interesting. I watched it for more than ten days. The heroine is not the kind of arrogant person. She will not fight against others when her strength does not allow it. She will take action when it is time to take action and never be high-profile when she should be low-key. The author is very imaginative. It is different from the fantasy novels I have read before. This is similar to science fiction. There is no Warcraft, instead of armor. The heroine is very powerful and can make anything. It may be related to the fact that she comes from the future and lives in the era of mechas, so it is quite good. In fact, I have almost forgotten the content. It is the first time I read this kind of thing and I think it is quite fresh.

It is a fantasy novel. The heroine keeps changing the map and starting from scratch. She is despised and then slapped in the face. The author has a lot of imagination and vividly expresses the arrogance and willfulness of the heroine. Very pretty

The first three interfaces are okay and you can check them out, but the modern interface won't work after that. The front interface, the Cultivation to Immortality interface, has a tolerable sense of modern science and technology science fiction. Later, when I traveled back to modern times, I could still endure modern times, and then my spiritual power recovered. After modern times, the interface was messy, modern, spiritual, and sci-fi, and it felt complicated and exaggerated. The routine is just a routine copy and paste, but it is undeniable that the previous books by the author are very good. I have also read a few books, but they are not good in the later stage.

There are a lot of typos in the article, and it is typical that the female protagonist is stronger than the male protagonist. No matter how hard she tries, the male protagonist will always be on top of the female protagonist. Her cultivation level must be higher than that of the female protagonist, which makes it uncomfortable to watch. However, the early plot content was quite interesting, but the later part where the two went to other worlds to understand the laws of heaven and earth was not of much interest, especially after the heroine gave birth to a child, so she stopped watching. Sure enough, I still can't accept childbirth stories. When I didn't have children, I liked watching the heroine's development. Once she had a child, she became obsessed with the child. And I don't know why the children in the stories I've read must have higher talents than the heroine. I want to see the female protagonist be the strongest from beginning to end, and there won't be any stories where the female protagonist is stronger than the male protagonist.

The writing is great, the dialogues are wonderful, the male and female protagonists have a correct outlook on life, and it feels a bit like Three Lives and Three Worlds. There are ancient times, modern times, immortality, and secular things. It's a hodgepodge, but it's very beautiful.

The setting is quite good. There are interstellar things introduced into the world of immortality, and the knowledge of mechas is used to refine war beasts. However, the author's control of the article is not very good. There are too many words that others mocked the heroine, and the impression is not very good. And it highlights the uniqueness of the heroine a little too much. If it is too hard, it will have a counterproductive effect. Including the heroine's mecha war beast, integrated into the Phoenix Soul, but the name of Erha's beast is Shaobing. I understand that the heroine feels so familiar and recalls the past, but the impression is really bad, and Shaobing is already a living being with a soul. At least respect its opinion. The bad taste at this time is really not funny.

The author's novel is well written, but it's a bit disgusting to read.

It's very interesting, but at the end, Shui Xiaoran just stopped writing and there was no ending.

I came here from the author's other books. I personally don't like reading fairy tale novels. I didn't expect that I have read more than 1,200 chapters. It's a really enjoyable read.