Immortal Alchemy God

15. It's very average. There are too many words and it's useless. At one point, it was still vague. Then I thought the main character was useless. As for whether it's useless or not, there's nothing to explain.

The writing is good, but it's too detailed and seems too wordy.

The most shameless procrastinator on the Internet, he can add plot points to past plots just to drag them out.

I read it from beginning to end. The early part was good, but the middle part was terrible. The ending was a mess. Rourou's origins were not told. The marriage ended without getting married. He could not resurrect his mother and uncle and aunt after breaking through to the Taoist realm. Cheng Lan at least mentioned a few words. Princess Ziyan became a passerby (but it is understandable that her father died at the hands of others). But in this case, why did she mention it later? Isn't this disgusting? Also, you hate killing the person from the previous life so much that you just re-seal him?

Motorola is losing money

Can it still be updated? Still want to see it! ! ! So pretty

In general, I talk a bit too much.