The Female Supporting Character Who Was Deprived of the Luck of the Koi Carp in the Novel When She Was Dressed as an Adult

Abandon the article, don't read it, don't read it, the plot is pretty good, the writing skills are also good, the only thing is that the female protagonist treats the male protagonist in a super disgusting way emotionally, every time she cuts it off first and then reveals it, every time, regardless of the male protagonist's feelings, she can tolerate it in the past, the one who goes to university in Hong Kong City, one She didn't tell the male protagonist until the day after departure. It was super disgusting. She also said that she didn't want to see the male protagonist give up his ideals for her. The female protagonist never considered the male protagonist from the beginning to the end. I don't know what the plot will be like. I really can't stand it after seeing this. The three views are weird and I am speechless.

I read more than 500 chapters without thinking (˶‾᷄ ⁻̫ ‾᷅˵) The most powerful thing in Hong Kong is the Hong Kong media. Paparazzi gossip, you said that a character who has appeared in newspapers and magazine covers actually comes to say something about his identity. I don't understand what this paragraph means. There is also the scene where her cousin's third uncle cheated on her, which foreshadowed the heroine's indifference to relationships because of her parents' divorce, and she felt very speechless. The male protagonist is indeed written like a licking dog praying for love.

The heroine comes from time travel, she is caring but not a virgin, she is capable and courageous, but I feel that the ending just after the heroine and the hero get married is a bit rushed. There are many villains who did not explain their fate, and many supporting characters who are related to the heroine are not introduced in the extra chapters. It is a bit regretful.

This article is not suitable for writing a male protagonist. Forcibly adding a male protagonist seems awkward. It makes the female protagonist extremely scumbag and annoying.

Either don't add a male protagonist. It makes the female protagonist a scumbag. If you don't like her, don't care about her for no reason. If you want to fall in love, you're hanging on her and not giving her equal status. It's disgusting.

Inexplicably everyone started to get rotten and smelly, and there wasn't a single good thing in the second half.

Neither the male or female protagonists are good

The process is too slow and too trivial. Some things are annoying and suffocating, but the heroine can't stand it anymore.

The heroine is not well designed. There is absolutely no need for a male protagonist. Isn't it good to be beautiful alone? Also, I hate having many people around me. I rely on the heroine. I especially hate Zhao Tingting, Zhu, and so on.

Seeing Xu Zhiqiang's cowardly appearance, I was so angry that I abandoned the article.