This Uchiha Is Far Too Cautious

It annoys me that the protagonist himself persecutes his own people just like Uchiha Itachi, but otherwise it's fine

The overall plot is quite exciting, but the biggest problem is that the content of the plot is too complicated. Many places repeatedly explain why it is done and how it is arranged; and then the ending feels like it is unfinished and ends hastily.

Too cowardly, too much nonsense, and a lot of explanations of inner thoughts. This alone can cut off 800 words in each chapter. In addition, the protagonist has no clear goals. He clearly learns ninjutsu, illusions, taijutsu, and swordsmanship. He has no own fighting system. He gives a 50-50 fight to anyone, and there are a lot of descriptions.

I thought it was going very well but it ended badly. The plot of Uchiha Kei and Hinata Rin getting married was something I was really looking forward to just now.

The writing is very bad, with typos and wrong names, the plot jumps around randomly, the present and the past, and the connections are broken! Also uses conscious writing many times which is great!

There are too many secondary assumptions in this book, and it is mixed with too many redundant explanations and narratives. It feels like the author deliberately included more private information. Maybe I feel wrong.

All I can say is that there is too much nonsense. It would be better to reduce it by one or two hundred chapters.

It's not good at all. The whole behind is a new plot.

Lots of nonsense. The thief looked awkward.

The word count is a bit high, the whole article is narration, I'm so good