Reborn in the Era: The Cannon-Fodder Eldest Sister Leads Her Younger Siblings to Victory

It's pretty good-looking at the front, but I'm really speechless at the back😓The heroine's aunt forces her younger son to help her selfish second son in the end! Liuya's turning outside to the turning outside at the back made me very angry! I originally wanted to comment on how well the author wrote these over a thousand chapters! As a result, I felt angry when I wrote it at the end! I can't stand the last few dozen chapters!

Because she missed half of it, how did her good friend disappear? Also, how did the first boyfriend change when he was a close friend? This is a turning point in her life, why don't you explain it?

1 The writing style is not good. First of all, this is a historical novel, not an ancient proverb. The author has not changed his previous writing habits. 2 There are too many typos, and I don't know if the editor's hands are shaking a lot, so I can see that many words are missing, causing the preface to be inconsistent with the follower. The three characters are different. For example, Zhang Huilan was reborn in her previous life and married Tian Jianle, who was self-made and became the richest man. Then through the heroine's experience of Zhang Huilan, we can see that she is more petty + short-sighted + showing off and other issues. I think her behavior of grabbing men instead of working hard and seizing the opportunity is very disdainful (my comment is because the system does not allow you to say nice things). Regarding this behavior, I think the author forcibly manipulated Zhang Huilan's character. The simplest behavior is to not take the college entrance examination when he knows it, and not to buy a house when he knows the house prices are rising. He only knows to encourage the male protagonist to go to Yangcheng. Anyway, the character is very interesting. 4. The heroine problem. Before the college entrance examination, the heroine's career was overall okay, but after the college entrance examination, the heroine's career was too exaggerated and exaggerated (I don't want to involve spoilers). The host set it up well. The story of the Mingming family and the rebirth of the legitimate daughter were both well written. I know the author likes long stories and I also like short stories. Although I don't like fierce wives. But the problem of the era of this novel is still bigger than that of The Strong Wife. If you like the author, please change it.

Just, the more I look at it, the more useless it becomes. Since I went to Hong Kong, I have earned tens of millions casually. I don't understand the prices of goods in Hong Kong at that time, but isn't it an exaggeration to make money like this in that era? And with a few comics to boost foreign exchange, he has become a key national protection target... Can you believe this? The following plot keeps making tens of millions in a swish, and buying a set in a Beijing compound... The more I read, the more useless it becomes. The male protagonist has been buried in money and hasn't appeared for a long time.

The plot is very exciting, but it's too long. I forgot about the previous part after watching the latter part. Can be brushed twice. In addition, there are a lot of typos, and there are also a few words in important paragraphs, which makes me confused and guessing.

The heroine is quite reckless and goes on a rampage. She does things without considering the consequences. She is confident in everything she does. After the incident, a lot of people were worried about her, and then she was fine...

The hostess is like a madman, not getting angry when she should be angry, and holding on to her when she shouldn't be angry.

It's a long story, the plot isn't exciting enough, I only watched half of it ~

A story created with great care by the author! A complete work from beginning to end! If the plot, characters and small details are handled more rounded and full, the whole work will be more perfect! Looking forward to the author's new works!

Write here and there, write here and there. The plot is confusing and words are missing. People who read it will have to guess.