
Embergun
余烬之铳
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 3.0M Words
- Genre
- Fantasy
- Subgenre
- European Fantasy
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qimao
Synopsis
All-time: Popularity, Must-read votes.
759Chapters
69kPopularity
1.1kReaders
1.7kMust-read votes
9.3Score
301Ratings
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Reader comments 15
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Is a novel divided into volumes with an outline and foreshadowing a novel? When reading online articles, I rarely get the same feeling I had when reading paper books. It's really good, and at the same time, I feel a sense of loss that I've never experienced before. Finished spreading flowers, thank you for accompanying me! From a plot point of view, the story is also very cliche, that is, the story of the savior killing demons. The whole text is either cutting and slashing, or on the way to slashing and slashing. Even the final battle is a bit sloppy. In the end, the boss only has a new pope, and even the lord of demons was taken away while he was still sleeping. I don't know where the resistance that could not be eradicated before is? There is a conflict here. But apart from the final battle, this book is very good in my opinion. The description of the characters, the promotion of the plot, and the portrayal of emotions have all reached the level that a physical novel should have. It's a pity that there are relatively few characterizations of Seleu and 047. Seleu can also be regarded as a female protagonist in the cultivation system. Lorenzo seems to be the plus version of 047, but it seems to be superimposed. The explanation of the novel setting is that there is a gap in the description of 047 and Seleu.
This is the first novel I have read recently! What can I say? The more novels I read, the more I read them. Nowadays, there are fewer and fewer good novels. Most of them I already know what they are going to write after reading the beginning, so I can't read them anymore. This novel feels like a condiment to me. It feels like it would be useless without it. Let's not talk about the plot. A peaceful ending is the most satisfying, hehehehe.
The ceiling, the real ceiling, it's a pity that I'm unlucky, otherwise I would just take off
The author grasps the Cthulhu style very accurately and writes the core. This is one of the advantages of the novel. In addition, the writing style of this book is indeed good, the wording and sentence construction are commendable (yes, beautiful words and sentences are indeed a plus point for a novel), and the translation quality is acceptable. After talking about the advantages, let me next talk about the reasons why I rated this book only average (7 points). 1. The description of the battle is too lengthy. The author does not know how to use subtraction to omit unnecessary fights, but focuses on describing a classic fight scene, so that reading the whole story will be very tiring. As you can imagine, after 10,000 words or 20,000 words, it is still describing the struggle between two people without changing the environment. The development of the plot is like an old woman's foot wrap. You can't collapse. 2. There are a lot of dialogues, and several people are talking meaningless nonsense. One chapter is 4,000 words, and as a result, dialogues that have no effect account for 2/3 or more, and the plot advances extremely slowly. It's not that dialogue is impossible. Good dialogue can be used to advance the plot, especially in mystery novels, which need high-quality dialogue to guide readers to think. But the dialogues in this book do not have these advantages. They are so boring that after reading it, I couldn't remember which dialogue was profound. If I have to give examples of profound dialogues, I suggest you watch "Teahouse" by Mr. Lao She. It is simply a classic model of dialogue. 3. This book has a total of seven chapters. The first chapter is amazing, the second chapter is a little worse, the third chapter is a little better, and then the fourth chapter becomes worse again. Chapter 5 is considered to be the most suspenseful chapter in the book, and the Cthulhu flavor was written out, but as a result, Chapters 6 and 7 collapsed directly (commonly known as unfinished), causing the reader's perception to fluctuate, which is why few people read it. Final summary: This book is better than most books with a rating of 9.5 Or above. Those who rated it high gave me a passing rating, but even a pass was not enough. But this book has a score of 7. If it were compressed into 1 million words, I could give it a score of 7.5. But the current situation of online articles is that without 3 million words, even a dog would not want to click on it, which is very embarrassing. Okay, that's it.
I wanted to look for gems and found the crown
After watching Endless Debt, what I look back on is still the familiar style of Guy A. It's a pity that it has not been popularized.
I am very interested in Western fantasy novels. I have read Lord of Mysteries and Embers of the Deep, and I think this book is worth reading.
To be honest, the book is really good
I've read Chapter 60 and stopped reading. It's quite depressing, I don't like it.
It's good to watch, the protagonist doesn't have the fighting power of Goldfinger, it's not a book that crashes, and it doesn't have a bad ending, but I don't know why it's not popular.