She Became a Sword Cultivator

I have watched one-third of it so far, and it is one of the best stories about female immortality that I have ever seen. It has a growth-oriented heroine who cultivates immortality, no CP, and the plot is still relatively compact. The heroine is extremely talented in swordsmanship and looks pretty cool😘. As the saying goes, the road to immortality is long, and the road of the strong is always lonely. The heroine has a cold personality but is not heartless (I like this character very much). The heroine has friends but not many. I hope it won't suck later!

I have been collecting this book for a long time at a certain point and plan to read it again when it is finished. I didn't expect Qimao to be promoted for free, so I couldn't wait because so many people recommended it. I have read more than 100 chapters now, and except for the upgrade system that I am not used to, everything else is amazing. It is not the popular colloquial cool article. This article is more written, concise and compact. It is a bit tiring to listen to the book at twice the usual speed. It is more suitable for quiet reading. Just like the girl in the book, in the long years of coldness and loneliness, she sticks to her true heart and walks alone on the road of cultivation. Since the world is unkind, then I must be a strong person, control my own destiny and not be a stupid dog, and be a great female majoring in immortal literature in the true sense. I also like the heroine's character. She doesn't pretend to be a pig to eat the tiger, and is even a bit arrogant and undisciplined. Just like the sword in her hand, she is indomitable and unstoppable. She is a swordsman!

Being intolerable is not a high score. I would give it 99 out of 100. The only bad thing is that it is still being serialized.

This article gave me the feeling that it was tasteless and a pity to discard. The writing was indeed very good, but the story line did not feel exciting. It was like the sect in the first small world where the heroine was in was destroyed. The heroine took a sword and returned to the sect to kill someone, and then was rescued and disappeared. After a few moments, we went to the next world, and some of the foreshadowing in the past was ignored. I thought it was very exciting, but it was not. This article is like a plate of very appetizing and exquisite dishes. After eating, I found that there is not much taste. The writing is good, but the story is not good.

This is a story in which the heroine gradually upgrades from the mortal world to the small world and so on. The heroine is decisive in killing the Holy Mother, which makes it very interesting to read at first. The more I read, the more headache I get. It's not that the setting of the heroine has changed, but also the author's writing skills are just like "Classical Chinese". It's so tiring to read😫. The most important thing is that the heroine's upgrade setting starts with Qi training → foundation building, and does not follow the steps of golden elixir, Yuanying, transformation of gods, distraction, etc. It has become divided into mysterious → unified → true infant → externalization → spiritual connection → cave virtual → source to etc. The new level plus the writing of "Classical Chinese", well, it is tasteless to eat and a pity to discard.

The writing is average at the beginning, but the author should make it smoother and more readable at the end. Generally speaking, as long as you can get through the relatively dull section at the beginning, I personally think this book is pretty good at the end. Well, although this kind of heroine has worked hard, her talent has been very high since she came out of the small world, and the journey has been relatively smooth. Then, the author's writing style at the beginning is very ancient, and sometimes it can be very tiring to read. The logic of the system of cultivating immortals in the whole book is relatively complete, but many people say that this book is very slow to update.

The plot is good, and the author's writing is good, but it's too wordy. The first half is okay, but the second half is spent writing about the supporting characters. The protagonist rarely appears, and even a bunch of unimportant people have to be written for several chapters. I really can't tell who is the protagonist and who is the supporting role later on. It's really putting the cart before the horse.

I really liked the previous content. I gave up the article after seeing this article about "Recruiting a Disciple". I really don't understand why it was written so early. The heroine is only two or three hundred years old, and her era has just begun. She still has a long way to go. What's more, all the disciples she has accepted are not much different from the heroine. They can be considered peers. It's not that she can't teach, but I feel it's unnecessary. It takes many years for a genius among geniuses like the heroine to have one. I still hope to focus on writing about the heroine's personal spiritual path.

I take it seriously. You have been chasing her for so long, and you have put your best efforts into it, but you want to accept a disciple. The heroine herself has a lot of enemies, so why accept a disciple? Xie Jing, who is more powerful than you, is not in a hurry to accept apprentices. You yourself have said that you will not accept apprentices for the time being, but you have never been firm. I hope you will be beautiful alone, and I also hope that you will accept apprentices after you have learned your lesson. At that time, you have the ability and time. Are you still worried about the lack of apprentices? I can't stand it anymore, wasting my time

The characters are too simple, and after so many chapters, the audience can't figure out what kind of personality the heroine is. I've watched a lot of it, and the characters almost all have the same personality. The author's writing is not bad, but sometimes it makes people look dazzled. In fact, when writing online articles, you only need to use the simplest vocabulary to express things clearly. So many gorgeous words are useless, and it will make people lose the desire to read further. I think if the author was willing to work on the characters and plot from the beginning, this book would definitely be a hit.