Mystery: Start with the Reader

It's very well written, very much like the Lord of Mysteries, and more respectful of the original work. It's a great fanfic. I don't know if it's the number one Mystery fanfic, but it's worth a read👍🏻

The writing style is indeed like the original work, and the original plot is also good. It has lost a lot of knives, but the pace is a bit slow. It's indeed quite worth seeing. I haven't finished reading it yet. I want to ask about the relationship between the protagonist and Xio in the later period, whether they have a lover or something.

I really don't understand why the protagonist insists on seeing Klein as his father and always thinking about him. Also, don't you have the "Pure White Eyes" that can improve your status and analyze everything? How come you don't exist in front of Klein, and you don't know anything about being spied on? A wonderful author, if you like the protagonist of the original work, there is no need to write a book to read it. I couldn't stand it anymore, so I gave up.

The protagonist calls himself Abner, and others call him Blaine and Abner. The two names are often exchanged, which sounds like a brain obstruction. The plot is bland, and the most important thing is that the two names are exchanged. Although the secrets also have name exchanges, there is no way that the same plot has two names scrolling back and forth. It is quite annoying!

At present, it seems to be the best mystery fanfic. The plot is very extended and substantial, and the mystery world is further extended. The characters are not broken. At least the protagonist is not a Down syndrome. The cheating is a bit big, but he is still a normal person in the mystery fanfic. There is no such disgusting behavior of changing the character to include a harem, but at the same time? The plot in the middle and later stages is a bit bland, which is a bit unsuitable for people who are used to watching Lord of Mysteries. After all, Squid is written very compactly, and then the plot is not compact, but if you don't watch it for a while, you won't be able to continue. As for the things in the black comments, I can only say that some are smart and some are not. The first point is that I can't remember the name or the name of the protagonist. The two words "talent", too many Western names, and the appearance of characters. This is to extend the world instead of sticking to the plot all the time, giving you the feeling of reading fan fiction. , Rather than the low-end knifeless version of the Lord of Mysteries. Secondly, the protagonist is not Tang's, and there is no idea of leaving behind Klein and going it alone, because the world needs the existence of the Lord of Mysteries. Is it more difficult and safe to let the door contaminated by the Mother Goddess and Amon, who may be dealt with by the Heavenly Lord, be more difficult and safer in the Mysteries? Moreover, Xiao Ke has a better personality and is easier to cultivate feelings. Secondly, not every normal person will want to become a god. Just like any prehistoric person's initial goal is to be a saint, first of all, he must have security and secondly, distance, and Xiao Ke is a known and inevitable partner, do you understand?

How can I put it, I can't stand the tenth chapter anymore. Reading the fan-fiction shows how mysterious and rigorous a person is. A newcomer at Sequence 9 without a church actually asked an old man from the Knowledge Church to bring a sun brooch to save people, and even used the history of the Fourth Age to repay the favor. It's really outrageous. Let's not talk about how you are doing it. Who knew about the sun brooch, and how did he know that the other party had it? Is the history of the Fourth Age known to ordinary people? Even if the protagonist is just talking nonsense, the key point is that the old man from Sequence 7 still believes it. You are from the Church of Knowledge, and you listen to a newcomer from Sequence 9 talking nonsense about the Fourth Age? If this is not a cult, or there is something special about it, why don't you report it immediately?

This book is a rare masterpiece for mystery fans, but in the context of the protagonist, Klein is very pretentious and arrogant. If you look at Xiao Ke from the perspective of this book, you feel that he is disgusting. He used up the extraordinary items that the detective stored in the Source Castle and then made excuses. Anyway, I can't stick to this book.

It's very well written, one of the best among the mysterious fics.

The plot is not only bland, but also a bit confusing. Although it imitates the Lord of Mysteries in terms of wording and sentence construction, this is a beautiful point. But apart from that, it is useless. A large number of chapters are filled with meaningless details that do not advance the plot at all. Moreover, by introducing so many meaningless people, the role of the protagonist was eliminated. Besides, the character creation of the protagonist is a complete mess. Not to mention that the image is not three-dimensional at all. After reading more than two hundred chapters, who can remember the character's personality and appearance? What's more, the author has shaped the protagonist into a licking dog without any cards. The most annoying novel like this is actually rated 9.5, Which is also impressive.

After reading a few chapters, the protagonist Goldfinger seems to be more of a prophet or knowledge of the plot, but he has been selling knowledge at will. According to the mysterious setting, he should have died a thousand times, and Klein's Source Castle is not so wasteful.