I Compose the Five Thousand Years of China

It is always lyrical, and the mood is always at a very high point. It makes people tense all the time, and it is tiring to read. In other words, some things do not resonate that much. If you insist on talking about the feelings of family and country, if you insist on being sensational, it will feel like primary school students singing together as a lonely brave man.

I feel like there is something wrong with the basic settings. I know that this is a parallel world, and I also know that the histories of both sides are generally consistent. But it feels a bit awkward to talk about our history here as serious history. Not to mention that in the later period, everyone actually said with sincerity, "I didn't expect there were such touching stories in ancient times." It was obvious that everyone was not just listening to the stories, but the problem is that 90% of them were "fake", blatant, and large-scale fabrication of history, and everyone still accepted it? ? It just felt like it was indescribable. It would be better to set it up from the beginning so that the history of both sides is the same, but the history books here are largely lost. "Retrieve history" is much better than "apply history". Then on to the plot, I feel that the lyrical content is a bit too dense. There is still a bit of drama in the early stage. Later, the more I write, the more it turns into a didactic writing style, 10% quotation + 60% analysis + 20% emotion + 9% nonsense, leaving only 1% to promote the plot. Although I read this kind of article just because I want to read some popular history and some brief literature, the way this book is written, to be honest, I would rather read Baijia Forum.

Well written! There are just a lot of holes left unfilled and the ending is hasty! That's it🤣🤣🤣

In a parallel world, various plots are forcibly added, which seems very abrupt.

They're all porters, and they made up so many names... It's embarrassing to watch.

It's okay to be a science popularizer, but there is no other entertainment.

Nonsense... Nothing... Nothing at all...

The whole article is about the lives and deeds of ancient people. The writing is very messy, with hammers here and there and sticks here and there. I write whatever comes to my mind. This novel is composed of the introduction of ancient people's information + the amazement of the barrage + door-to-door money delivery at scenic spots.

Logic doesn't make sense. The two worlds must be the same. Lu Xun was only a few years old and there are no records left.

Copying the entire homework becomes more and more boring the more you read it