Yellow Monkey of Konoha: Pay Me, and I’ll Take Down the Five Kage!

The scene of a 6-year-old and 175cm tall man playing with a group of children is too inconsistent. The key is that those little brats are not afraid? The setting is too ridiculous, a bunch of runny noses

No, buddy, you wrote well in the early stage, but in the later stage, what are you doing when you join One Piece? The catchphrase is gone, the habit of laziness is gone, it was written purely for the sake of completion. Not to mention that there were two times where the previous content was copied and pasted to make up the word count, and there was also a second time traveler who inexplicably added a completely incorrect chapter. If you don't want to write about it, you can just finish Naruto and forget about opening the door to get to Pirates. The purpose of writing about Pirates now is purely a stepping stone🤣🤣🤣

I originally like to read Naruto and Pirates novels, and the author's world view is really fascinating. When I first read the middle, I thought that in the world of Naruto, the Ten-Tails would be resurrected and fight like other Naruto novels, but taking people to the world of One Piece was something I didn't expect. Although the protagonist's combat power is the strongest in any world, it is fun to watch, but it does not have the kind of fast-paced development that is completed all at once. I just happened to read the latest chapter today, and I had to wait for a long time to read it all at once. Big cheers for the author! It would be better if you could write a few more chapters!

The author hasn't watched Naruto seriously, has he? You can say that the Uchiha are impulsive, you can say that they don't rely on the group and are superior. In order to continue the plot, they actually say that the Uchiha are being biased. Uchiha are very face-saving.

The plot is okay. The standard Long Aotian template, the character is fairly consistent with the original work. . It was nothing to read as a cool article. . But then it was all a series of articles, half of the previous content was glued together, and the plot was too severe. . Leave it for a few days first. If this is the case, give up.

The single heroine Tsunade, Madara's life is so great. He hasn't died in so many chapters, so why is there a parallel world?

It's not that it's not good to read, but after more than 480 chapters, the chapters start to get messed up. I don't know if it was copied from somewhere or how it affects the viewing. It's not just a Naruto story, but it also brings a pirate world. It looks like a warmonger who goes around causing trouble. Except for the ability template and the speech like Kizaru, there is nothing else that can be seen.

So awesome. He knocked down Jiraiya at the age of six. He was invincible all the way to the end.

I used to watch it every day. But recently I went to school. Can't watch it in the middle of the night.

The steaming is quite smooth, it suits my taste, and it looks good.