Bai Yueguang's Substitute Made the Whole World of Cultivation Cry

The heroine has just regained her memory and got rid of the love brain, and is about to open the book. The male protagonist appears in the next chapter, and he is still following the heroine. It seems that getting rid of the love brain was a joke. The hero appeared too early, and even made a life-and-death contract. It always feels like a forced match. It's not a story about a female protagonist, because the male protagonist is by her side throughout the entire story, and the male protagonist is even more powerful than the female protagonist. Moreover, the male protagonist is also a demon king. I don't really like this kind of thing. Isn't it good that everyone is on the right path? Does it have to be the other way around to show strong favor?

This book can be directly transferred to the male channel. It is a story about a pure male protagonist. I can't remember where the female protagonist is strong. All I can think about is how cold and powerful the male protagonist is. The female protagonist has to take all the damage to get through the test. The male protagonist casually kills people as soon as he comes. When fighting against certain villains, I still lamented that the female protagonist is so strong and smart when fighting against certain villains. The villains are not brainless chickens. They are evenly matched and are quite interesting. There is no such thing as a brainless protagonist. The hero haloed, but when the hero appeared, he slapped her in the face. Every time the heroine was in a critical moment, the hero would always come for her. He resisted damage by himself, was tenacious and refused to admit defeat, and dealt with powerful enemies. Even small things like knocking away people who made rude remarks with his palm were attributed to the hero. The only impression of the heroine is probably that she has some magical operations and tricks from time to time. To paraphrase a sentence in the article, it is a sweet love story covered in the skin of a cultivator.

1. There is a problem with the writing. The heroine's strength only declined a year ago. It was written in the article that the disciple remembered that the heroine's combat strength was like this a few years ago and now it is just a reply. 2. No matter how powerful the male protagonist's spiritual consciousness is, but his cultivation level is on the 1/6th floor of Nazang Sutra Pavilion, how can there be no prohibitive or high-level cultivation barrier? 3. The original heroine killed more than a dozen of her fellow disciples, and she could easily lie and have inner demons. Why should she be able to come and go freely after only being whipped and grounded? 3. The issue of the world view. It is written that the gods have long since disappeared and the spiritual springs are about to become extinct. Since there is a world that can breed the gods, why does Taixuan Sword Sect, one of the four largest sects in the world, only have a dozen golden elixirs? Is it reasonable for Yuanying to write that there are only a few transformed gods and only two or three? A world where the gods once lived should not be so backward. There is no need to write about how powerful the heroine is. 4. Regarding the heroine's fighting, the heroine first traveled through time and was not proficient in practicing for an hour or two before mastering it. She only had the basics. The heroine also learned advanced swordsmanship very quickly. Why not write about the process? The fighting star Yao Niu is also described as being led to defeat three of them, led and defeated again, and then was chased by dozens or twenty people. After running for a few rounds, his physical strength was not very good, and he was easily killed by the heroine. There was no detail about the swordsmanship that the heroine contacted. The article on cultivating immortals only looked at the fighting scenes and omitted only looking at how strong he was and how talented he was. What's the use of that? 5. A reasonable swordsman should have sword will and sword heart. What I have read so far has not mentioned anything about learning high-level swordsmanship, nor about indirectly understanding the way of the sword. Moreover, the gold finger is huge and thick. Thick gold fingers are nothing. There is no mention of the training process, no fighting, and no mention of the heroine's rank in a few months. 6. Since there is a world where the Gods have appeared, the heroine is written to have a hundred-year-old fire spirit root, so the alchemy techniques of the fire spirit root are all the alchemy manuals written by the second and third spirit roots. A skinny camel is bigger than a horse. There must have been a single fire spirit root in its heyday in the past. What about the alchemy techniques passed down by the single fire spirit root? There is no need to write about how strong the heroine is without any logic. The cool article just forgets about the training process, the process of learning things, and the fighting process. The heroine wins, succeeds, and learns? Just for the sake of having fun? That's what I said. A world where the Gods exist should not have only a dozen golden elixirs in one of the four major sects. Even if the Gods' spirit of destruction is still there, right? The legacy of the founder of the previous sect is still there, right? 7 As long as you write about some fighting scenes or the training process, I will not give it a bad look. Moreover, the original heroine killed many people and some whippings did not damage the basic spiritual roots. So the grounding will be over? Logically speaking, shouldn't such a person be fired? There is no need to write like this just to contrast with the heroine

It's good-looking, and this is a story about a great female protagonist. Just because the male protagonist is strong, you can't deny that the female protagonist is a grown-up heroine. Although the male protagonist is a demon, he is not a heinous person. Be it humans or demons, they all have good and bad qualities. Don't worry just because the male protagonist is a demon. (And the male protagonist is very talkative when it comes to key plot points). I just don't understand how the life and death contract is concluded.

I like martial arts very much! Really nice to look at. It feels very good. (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

The part where the heroine is strong is not written in detail, only the fight scene is scrawled. Also, the female protagonist's Nascent Soul self-destructed and killed the male protagonist. How did the female protagonist know where the male protagonist was in retreat, and how did she break in? Wasn't there a barrier in the male protagonist's retreat? At that time, the male protagonist was much stronger than the female protagonist, so the barrier set up should not be weak. Since the heroine can break in, why can't the hero's enemies? And since the male protagonist is contracted by the four major sects, why does he kidnap the female protagonist back to the devil world? Even if the male protagonist is too weak now and regains his strength later, why not tie him up? In the process of getting along with the heroine, did he fall in love with his murderer? ? ? Does the male protagonist have any hobbies? There are so many women in the world, but you just fall in love with the one who killed you? ! In one of the four major sects, there is no inner disciple who can fight with the female protagonist? It only took the heroine half a year to defeat all the inner sect's golden elixir disciples. The inner sect disciples of a large sect would all have some life-saving magical weapons, not to mention that the disciples with a certain background can enter this sect and their talents and financial resources are not too bad, but they were defeated by the heroine in half a year🙄. The hard work and talent of the heroine are forcibly highlighted, making it look a bit like the heroine is very strong and can defeat everyone, but she cannot defeat the male protagonist. 😓😓😓

I didn't like it half way through. I don't know what the ending of the original heroine was like, but I don't like the current development trend. When the heroine won the 4th game against the people from Kunlun Palace, people around her reacted in an exaggerated way. The original heroine just passed her in the 5th game, which was too hasty. I think the original heroine shouldn't have been obsessed with the senior brother. She can be as happy as she wants on her own, so what kind of female rivalry is there? . . I feel that if the heroine talks to the original heroine, the original heroine may come out a little bit. Although she may not accept it, she can't be affected by her inner demons all the time. . So annoying. Love is the most annoying thing. The original heroine's performance was not very positive. . I don't know what to say, but I just feel like she shouldn't be like this.

It's too bland, without the ups and downs.

Look, it's absolutely fun! Funny and humorous!

It's quite interesting, and the plot is complicated and confusing, with two levels of reversal. The general plot is that Jiang Yanlu was originally a noble Phoenix god. Her father died in the battle against the Demon King. Her mother was depressed after giving birth to the phoenix egg. She took poison and died in love a few years later. She also broke the shell prematurely, causing her soul to be divided into two halves, one half in the egg, and the other half reincarnated on the earth countless times. It was quite miserable. She always thought that she had traveled through time, and she didn't remember everything until she regained her true phoenix body. The character of the male protagonist is also very three-dimensional, with top-notch combat power, and most importantly, a strong self-strategy. What I like most is that after the male and female protagonists fall in love, they are not bored, and the female protagonist still follows her heart. She practiced hard and didn't indulge in love. The second one was Fuyu. She didn't appear much, but her stubbornness created a big disaster. This humble Phoenix man destroyed the entire divine domain and almost brought down the world. Even the law of heaven couldn't hold him. He is the villain boss that has been foreshadowed many times in this article. It's a group portrait story, but most of the other supporting characters are male, and they're not well portrayed. They're small followers. Their function may be to be saved by the hero and heroine all the time, licked by the hero and heroine all the time, praised all the time, and highlighted the hero and heroine. I won't talk about the original hero and heroine, but they are disgusting love brains who forcibly suppress their intelligence.