After Being Canceled Online, She Returned to the Countryside to Retire

I like the heroine's character and filial piety. She always thinks about her loved ones and abides by the bottom line. It is a warm and healing article. I hope that she can slowly write high-quality works in the future. Come on⛽️

I thought it looked pretty good in the early stage, but after looking at it I found it to be very ordinary. Mainly because there were too many details, which made it look a bit verbose, making it look more like hydrology.

It was good at the beginning, but it was too bland in the middle and ended up making my eyes tired.

Song Tan's notes are more interesting, this one is quite boring haha, the two people who are cultivating immortals act like fools

Not finished yet! Because I can't stand watching part of it. The best relatives have many evil intentions and the good people are blind and just want to whitewash the peace. The parents have been bullied but they deceive themselves and others to whitewash the peace. It would be worse to have no parents or relatives, and they will only burden their children! It made me angry, so I couldn't watch it anymore! All I can say is that they are all idiots and very ugly!!! Bad review, bad review!!! 🤮🤮🤮

I watched half of it and couldn't stand it anymore. The heroine was bored and separated. She was pampered by her family for a while, but her emotions were very ordinary. Her mother loved her very much when she saw her parents being scolded by others for being in debt, and she always described the heroine getting married at every turn. The heroine wanted to take care of her old age, but she always allowed herself to be bullied. The plot was also very flat. It was far worse than the character creation and description techniques of Song Tan's Chronicles. I couldn't stand it even if I wanted to watch it as a substitute.

See 450 abandoned articles. I feel like the heroine is not very decisive. This is just my personal feeling

The heroine is like a mute

The writing is smooth, but the plot is too bland. The whole family, from parents to relatives, was so angry that they ran away.

At first I thought it was pretty good, but then I couldn't think about it (every time before the protagonist even fought for it, the customer would raise the price like crazy, and the protagonist relied on the supporting characters to take the initiative to feed themselves). Then, the author always liked to talk to the crowd and give up in the middle. This is such a bad habit. Of course, as long as the protagonist makes a fortune by selling vegetables, there will definitely be no shortage of customers for the food. No matter how bad your attitude is, you are not afraid, but what the hell is it that you always leave halfway through? It's like people who are not short of money waste water, occupy the road casually, and beat people half to death when they are happy. It's okay, anyway, they are not short of money. They should recharge and recharge, and they should pay for it. But the quality is really poor Of course, the protagonist himself subconsciously avoids these exchanges not because of poor quality, but because of a lack of ability to deal with things, but this is a big problem. The longer the story, the greater the impact of this problem and the more it affects the perception. Let's change this habit of subconscious avoidance. The book itself has surpassed most works. If we improve a little more, we still have a good chance of becoming a first-class book.