Jueding Danzun

I'm really tired of reading. What the hell are you writing?

After talking for a long time, I still said the same old words.

The protagonist doesn't look like an old monster, but like a stupid young man who shows off his strength and fights fiercely. The protagonist's advantage lies in alchemy, but he insists on developing martial arts. This does not mean that martial arts cannot be developed, but it should be focused. The extremely rubbish description of interpersonal relationships and the relationships between various forces in society is the biggest flaw of this article. The writer lacks the temperament of a superior, so I suggest you stop writing such articles.

It's pretty good. It's better than many so-called masterpieces.

A nonsensical book, just for the author's own enjoyment.

IQ is off the line... The protagonist returns to life as Dan Zun. He doesn't understand many things... He is just like an ordinary person... There is nothing special...

Look, this is a lump. He is obviously the protagonist, but he is so aggrieved. You can imagine that the author's life is not as good as a 🐶. The farther back he is, the more he pulls. It is worse than squeezing out toothpaste.

After reading more than a thousand chapters, I was really impressed and convinced. He likes to pretend to be serious but he really should be serious but he is a fool. He always said that he was a peerless person before but he didn't know any special skills. He never had a plan for every action. If he was going to die, it would all depend on his parents and his wife. Return to the Holy Mother's heart, like to say good things but never do them well, like to accuse others and always do it yourself. Indecisive. He likes to find things to do for himself, and he also wants to write about pig's feet being passionately devoted to his wife, but he always ignores others. Writing about provoking other people's feelings without wanting to be responsible is useless. There are also a bunch of opposing ideas, which are getting more and more disgusting the more I read them.

The more I look at it, the worse it gets

Is the combat power so broken? 5. Become a demon king. Can't you beat the peak of your spiritual veins?