Machine Breaks the Galaxy

It looks pretty good, but a lot of the plot relies on the female protagonist to lead the way. The heroine's father gave no explanation at the end before he died (although it was related to the Gate of Kamigawa). The ending is very hasty, the empire has no sense of existence, the other invaded universes are not explained, the ancient gods are sleeping, and in the end it is said that the domain lord is the god, those old friends and enemies, not even the academy is mentioned in the end

I read it a few years ago, and then I threw it away in my library because it was too hard to catch up on updates. I finished it today, and I am still fascinated by it. I feel that the ending is a little rushed, but it is also very good. Overall, I am willing to give it a 9 out of 10 points.

It's an absolutely beautiful and refreshing article. Compared with now, there will definitely be a lot of people complaining about it, but this thing seems to be a refreshing article written in 16 years. It's really okay to write such a refreshing article eight years ago. Now that I've read the early part of the third chapter, I feel good and it's very refreshing.

The first 30 chapters are still readable without conflicts. Although many of the plots are cliche, the overall progress is okay. After the 30th chapter, the conflicts are revealed. Others are discussing it, and then you rush over and grab the passerby and ask you again. The protagonist is not very smart. Does he have something to do with the passerby? Look like you want to kill someone, write and ask normally, and then just say it, then there is the main body of the conflict. The person who introduced you had his leg broken. You have written it in the previous contract. If you are beaten and disabled, you will lose money. It means that you are not good at it. If you make this money, you have to bear the risk. Then the protagonist hears that others If you have your legs broken, you have to rush in and kill others. No matter whether it is reasonable or not, no matter whether you are strong enough or not, it doesn't matter. I really want to drag the protagonist's head to the ground for more than ten meters, and then kick your brain with a football. If you don't know how to write about violent conflicts, you don't have to write about it. What you write has no basis and no basis. It's disgusting. This kind of plot is 💩.

Thank you mom. There are a lot of words at the end of each paragraph. Originally, the number of words in each paragraph was less than others. In the plot, any student can affect the college entrance examination

I've read dozens of chapters and it's not bad, but there is a fatal flaw. What are the parameters of the mecha? All based on imagination? How can readers know what kind of mecha it is without mecha parameters? This is far worse than (machine combat full metal).

First, the protagonist is written as a savage who is isolated from the world, and then there is a bit of a virgin, plus a bunch of brainless villains.

No poke, no poke

Generally speaking, there is no description of whether a mecha is powerful or not, and what its capabilities are. There are no parameters or anything like that. It all depends on imagination. Moreover, the mecha is so powerful that it can destroy a group of battleships. No matter how big the mecha is, even giant mechas can't do it. Where is the power? With such a powerful single machine, wouldn't it be invincible? Let's not talk about the mecha, but the later stage of intelligence reduction begins. The protagonist has the most powerful artificial intelligence life, but as a result, even if he has tools, he cannot use them. The protagonist relies on the aura of immortality to fight hard. Even if he works hard, he is still a virgin. There is no big BOSS. A group of second-generation players are half-dead because of the aura of the protagonist. The protagonist is just decisive in a bunch of small things, but when it gets bigger, it's over. She is an indecisive retarded virgin. I can't bear to talk about the ending at the end. It's anticlimactic, the explanation is vague, and the writing of a good subject is terrible. The writing in the front is still good, but it feels like a replacement in the back, at least not seriously, so I give the evaluation as average, not bad.

After reading more than forty chapters, I really can't understand what aspect this book is about, whether it's about mechas or training. At level 21, I'm still just a cannon fodder, and I only fought a mecha battle once in more than forty chapters.