The Peerless Immortal Doctor of the City

You can jump from one chapter to 20 chapters to see how you can read this novel. Every time there is a prelude to a fight, at least 5 chapters are written. The protagonist is obviously a level higher than the opponent. It can still last 3 chapters, and he is also injured internally. The word "" is ok.

Really average. Just look at the beginning

The logic is confusing, the sentences are simple and meaningless, and the plot is just a pretense of changing the soup without changing the medicine. The aura of the protagonist is invincible. An immortal emperor who returns to the mortal world? Can't walk when he sees a woman? Only the women that the protagonist can meet are fair-skinned, beautiful and long-legged beauties who are geniuses in cultivating immortals? Are the others all shit? When the plot changes from the secular world to the 3000 small world of true martial arts, I forgot which chapter. The author said in the story novel that innate masters rarely participate in secular disputes. If you can usually see one, you are unparalleled in the world, okay? In the next chapter, there will be hundreds of innate masters who want to steal your things and start a fight with you? The fighting power has collapsed, and there is no desire to continue watching. As long as the good things and opportunities belong to the protagonist, your genius confidante does not have their own opportunities? They all rely on the protagonist to feed themselves? When the plot is dull, the protagonist does not have 13 hard-wearing, he is really a low-level man. The author should study more!

After reading about 900 chapters, let me know what you think! I won't mention the typos. Some things I mentioned before seem to have been forgotten and mentioned again later (roughly a few times, for example, after the protagonist of Ghost Doctor Valley uses soul-catching to understand the situation of the hidden door, he will later mention that he wants to know the situation of the hidden door before he meets the people in Ghost Doctor Valley and kills him. When he was admitted to the Bihai Martial Academy, the director He was right there. Later, when summoned by the higher-ups, he said that the person who had perfected the desolate realm must be the master of the courtyard. It was quite speechless.) Secondly, the people who followed the protagonist into the small world were all lost (their cultivation level was still very low). The protagonist was not panic at all and couldn't find any way not to look for it. Author, do you think that's right?

There are too many inconsistencies, such as: Zhuge Lian's father died more than a hundred years ago and his daughter was only a teenager. Aunt Linghu said she didn't know about the Ziyan Sect, it was just a small sect. It was said here that the Ziyan Sect had been friends for generations and had many marriages.

Let's just make it work, just make up the word count with nonsense, the male protagonist is a bitch and a bitch, suitable for people who are depressed and frustrated to daydream.

I have read them all, very detailed, City, Ancient Dance, Small World, Three Thousand, Immortal Realm, God Realm. Although it is a bit long-winded, it is still good. The ending is the same as most novels. It is too fast and it ends when it reaches its peak. This is the fault of all the authors.

Read more than 300 chapters! This book is very speechless. Some numbers and realms are inconsistent. The most outrageous thing is that the more you practice, the mirror realm becomes lower! What's more, the author has absolutely no understanding of society (life, the environment, and the ways of the world). To put it bluntly, he has no IQ (his ability to write books is limited) and no emotional intelligence (the image of the protagonist and how he handles things are completely incomprehensible)! The most outrageous thing is the explanation. Not a single sentence is on point. To put it bluntly, it is worse than a child.

The author's writing is good, but the overall feeling after reading it is so-so. There are no high ups and downs. Promotion is as dull as eating and drinking. Although he is the reincarnation of the late emperor, everything is under control and there is no suspense. It is too smooth and there is no sense of crisis.

There are too many details, it is too wordy, and the logic is not rigorous enough.