My Wife Is a Big Star

This book is not a good read. Apart from the memory of the previous life, the protagonist has nothing to make fun of. At the same time, there is no system and it looks more natural and warm. The plot of this book is slow and the marriage is not shown until the end. It would be perfect if the ending could simply include life after marriage and children. All in all, this book is very suitable for reading slowly.

The male protagonist has a super naughty personality. Apart from time travel and cheating, he has no merits worthy of the female protagonist's love. . . After reading more than forty chapters, I don't want the heroine to marry the hero. This kind of stuff is a street stall and has no merit. . .

Plainness is the truth. This book is suitable for people with a slow temper. In the fast-paced, thrill-seeking era of online writing, this book is not outstanding, but it is better because of its clear logic, natural emotional lines, sophistication of people, and the values ​​of the male protagonist are gentle and real.

Let's talk about the advantages first. The plot is enjoyable enough and the overall completion is okay. However, the ending ends abruptly and I didn't watch enough. As far as personal taste is concerned, for this kind of daily novel, there is no need for business wars to occupy too many chapters. You can depict more interactions between the male and female protagonists, so as to increase the sweetness. Then let's talk about the shortcomings. The first is the problem with the creation of the heroine. There is almost no description of the heroine's psychological activities. It depends entirely on the explanations of the hero and the people around her. Although this can maintain the heroine's aloof image and pave the way for the subsequent contrast, there is no need to not describe any inner activities. Well, and the heroine's lines were repeated over and over and only had a few words - "boring", "ok", "more"... The portrayal was too thin, and the image of the heroine in the later period could not be established, giving me a feeling of being wooden. In the later period, she completely turned into a machine to promote the plot. Secondly, the description with the most flaws is the plot of the first-line female singer's withdrawal from the competition. The plot was a collective loss of wisdom and the perception was too bad. In the end, this daily novel is well-written and the flaws in the plot are not hidden. It is still worth reading.

This book should be renamed "My Mute Girlfriend" The author is definitely old and single, and he doesn't spend too long with girls. The author wanted to portray the heroine of this book as a cold and cold person, but ended up portraying her as a rubber girlfriend. Let's put it this way, as long as this book is about the heroine's plot, there will always be a sentence, "The heroine wanted to say something, but after thinking about it, she didn't say it after all. This was a gentle hum." This sentence appears hundreds of times in this book, and every time the heroine appears, it will be written once. If you don't know how to portray, don't do this. Is this how you portray a cold character? Even if you describe it from multiple angles and write more about the heroine's psychological reaction, I won't say anything. The result is that every time, I don't say what I want to say, and I can't write clearly what I think. The AI ​​articles are better than yours.

In addition to puckering my lips, I pout every day. It's really uncomfortable and depressing to watch.

This entertainment novel is indeed the best I have read so far. It is slow-paced but very sweet. It has a single female protagonist and the author's writing is quite good. Worth recommending. There are also small flaws, such as actor classmate Xiaoxiao. From beginning to end, it feels like there is no difference between having it and not having it.

If you are a misanthrope, don't read this. The author likes to write words that make misanthropes sick.

I can't stand it anymore. You can't be so slow in getting started. It's been two or three years now and I haven't even held hands. I guess I started falling in love after it was over. I don't want to watch it anymore.

If I were to rate this book, I would give it a 7. I read almost two-thirds of it and gave up after skipping to the last chapter to check out the ending. The career line is well written, with a thorough understanding of the industry and a clear development path. But the emotional line is too bad. . . Since he has always been from the male perspective, and the heroine is a typical I person, the author tried to express the heroine's inner activities and emotional progression through a large number of expressions and body language. The idea is very good. If the plot is successfully portrayed, the plot will be very detailed and vivid. Many good works are also written like this. However, the author's writing power is limited and his imagination is not enough. He only uses the action of pursed lips over and over again. Every time there is a high-profile scene where the male and female protagonists have an emotional confrontation, the female protagonist will resort to the trick of pursed lips, never getting tired of it, and pouring cold water on the good content. That's all, but forget it. The further you go, whenever the heroine has any mental activity, she will just be lazy and purse her lips. Does the author think readers can read minds or read faces, and understand the character's mind instantly just by puckering their lips? If you sip too much, it will only make people think that the heroine has a twisted personality and a tangled heart. To be honest, reading this book I can't tell why the woman likes the hero or when she fell in love with him. Moreover, it is a taboo for the same words to appear repeatedly in literary works. Since you cannot master the writing method that requires high skills, it is better to use honest, practical and ordinary psychological description.