Makeup

The pace is a bit slow, it is a skip-and-read, and the author always emphasizes that the heroine is kind, and what she does is legitimate and unavoidable. I don't think there is anything wrong with the heroine's revenge, but this should be left to the readers to judge between the lines. Constantly indoctrinating readers will only make people disgusted. Thanks to the support from my peers, my writing level is not much better than that of authors on the same platform, so I still give it a good review~~

I have read all the author's works with a score of 9.0 Or above. This article is the worst one, so I will abandon it. The reason is simple, there is almost no logic in this article. A girl who was reborn as an 8-year-old girl. Although she was written to be relatively smart and different from her peers, she did not have any notable deeds or family background. Her methods were only used in some internal battles, but she always recruited some helpers inexplicably and subdued some adults with skills. There was no persuasiveness. (I just gave up writing when I saw that the person who had worked as a staff member for several officials came to work as an accountant in the shop of a 9-year-old child like her). Moreover, I was a female master in my previous life, but died in a house fight so hastily. It shows that my brains and means were not enough, and I actually became a "master" who was easily taken over by others as soon as I was reborn? Simply...

The writing is verbose, and the heroines are all children who have been reborn until a certain age, and they have to pretend to be adults. They can't bear to look at children and speak in adult language. This is the case in both books. The techniques are old and the same, and they are abandoned.

It's well written, but why isn't it rated highly?

It's been almost a hundred chapters, and we haven't seen the male protagonist except for a flash in the first chapter! The plot is also very speechless, and the female protagonist has incorrect views.

It feels very long-winded after I write it, but the rest is fine.

The back part is indeed quite long-winded. How come the enemy of the heroine is the entire Xie family? It seems that the third bedroom didn't harm the heroine too much! Why is it a matter of life and death?

The logic is extremely poor. In order to fill in the gaps, the author has to constantly justify himself and try to brainwash the readers. There are long paragraphs describing the character's psychological journey everywhere. The preface and follow-up are often inconsistent, which makes it a headache to read. The plot is procrastinating, and the male protagonist doesn't appear until more than 100 chapters. The highlights of the male and female protagonists disappear after marriage, as if they were different people before marriage. There are so many flaws. I don't understand how it got such a high rating? Are they all beaten by primary school students?

It was okay at the beginning, but the plot behind it was illogical, so I gave it up.

It's so frustrating! The little prince died in vain! The old emperor actually didn't kill all the Duke Protector's family! It's so devoid of temper and logic! For a family of ministers who plotted to murder the emperor's heir, it was already merciful not to execute the nine clans, but the whole family was dismissed from office. It was so inconsistent with the fate of those who murdered the emperor's heir in ancient times! Especially the culprit, the Protector of the Country, did nothing at all! Revenge for killing your son! Just let it go? It's so frustrating! I'm really frustrated with the old emperor.